Reviews For Kimberly
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Reviewer: daftpunk Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2016 11:35 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation

hey really well done! i was wondering if you were planning to incorporate some unaware gts chapters when the protagonist is doll size or smaller? he might get stuck and unable to move or mistaken for another object. You have writing talent!

Reviewer: LilBinary Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2016 2:48 PM Title: 2 feet, 6 inches (House Guest)

Amazing story so far! I will be checking regularly and eagerly for the next update!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2016 12:46 PM Title: 2 feet, 6 inches (House Guest)

Ice water; must have some. Now!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2016 12:35 PM Title: 4 feet, 2 inches (Twin Peaks)

I guess family men aren't the masters of subtlety they think they are.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2016 12:26 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation

Loved the cliff-hanger. :-)

All that was missing was the classic sound effect: "GASP!"

Reviewer: MadHatter Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2016 9:45 AM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation

Well this one will be a gem in the future. I think the biggest thing right off the bat I liked about your narrative is that you didn't make the main guy completely focused on the focal girl too fast. 

Keeping it slow and having good development is great sometimes, and you are doing it well! Good luck for future updates 

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