Date: October 01 2016 12:15 AM Title: 1.21 inches (Smallest, pt 1)
I think it would be dangerous to go in her mouth. Frightning.
I like Brooke's idea of her dominating someone.
Later,
Diesel
[Report This]Date: September 30 2016 6:05 PM Title: 1.21 inches (Smallest, pt 1)
Excellent chapter! I love Kim and her new found power and lust, I kinda hope Andy stays this small!
[Report This]Date: September 30 2016 10:57 AM Title: 1.21 inches (Smallest, pt 1)
No problems, dude. I'll just sing that old Carol King classic till you post the next chapter.
"Anticipation! Antici-pay-yay-tion is makin' me wait. It's keepin' me way-yay-yay-a-tin'!
[Report This]Date: September 27 2016 7:17 AM Title: 2 inches (Tricks, pt 2)
Excellent story so far! Brooke is an odd daughter, but she makes things interesting. I'm hoping he grows a bit though. Shrinking below two inches can mean more danger and less fun. Either way, I'll keep reading!
Author's Response:
Agreed on the under 2 inches being more dangerous and less sexy. I think the 2 inches to doll range is really the best.
Date: September 26 2016 4:59 PM Title: 2 inches (Tricks, pt 2)
I do have to wonder what Brooke means by "This... is going... to be... AWESOME!" Does this mean incest and threesome to come?
Author's Response:
I think she's reacting to the prospect of her best friend joining the family. Incest with blood relatives I consider disgusting. She is kinda of a freak, though. Lots of opportunities for deviant behavior from her.
Date: September 26 2016 1:33 PM Title: 2 inches (Tricks, pt 2)
Great chapter. The taco eating was great. I really like how you show things from andys perspective.
Well done,
Diesel
[Report This]Date: September 26 2016 12:16 PM Title: 2 inches (Tricks, pt 2)
Just wanna pop in here and say this story has been phenomenal! I usually don't have much to say to leave chapter by chapter reviews so I don't but I read every new chapter of this religiously! Thanks for sharing this story with the community!
Author's Response:
You're welcome, and thank you for the encouragement. Only 6 chapters to go!
[Report This]Date: September 26 2016 12:01 PM Title: 2 inches (Tricks, pt 2)
And, with this cliff-hanger, we progress from awkward to weird. Still funny! But, weird.
Date: September 23 2016 1:37 AM Title: 2 inches (Tricks, pt 1)
I liked his finding the climbing easy. Very neat. Having Brooke describe things was amazing. She has really grown. Hard not to be interested in that conversation.
Interesting chapter,
Diesel
Are you still working on another small Paul chapter?
Author's Response:
Paul will reappear in the final 3 chapters. It basically becomes his story then.
Date: September 21 2016 12:19 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
Nice chapter, I want to see what his daughter is willing to do to him sex wise. I have to ask if Andy knew the boobs where not Kimberlies' because the nipples were pink then what race is Kimberly? There is not that much discriptive details about their apperance other than there boobs.
Author's Response:
Andy knows at this point in the story that Kimberly has brown hair and brown nipples. He deduced it was Brooke because she was the only other girl in the house at the time. Both girls are white, in my view. Brooke has paler skin, is shorter, skinnier, and less athletic than Kimberly.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2016 11:34 AM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
And this is going to backfire badly I predict.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2016 11:19 AM Title: 2 inches (Tricks, pt 1)
Well, that was awkward. Funny! But, awkward.
Date: September 20 2016 3:18 AM Title: 3 inches (Astronaut Barbie)
Not weird at all. I liked some of you early ideas with Kimberley and the Alice part was fun. The dogs were scary and I liked how Alice reprimanded them while he was frightened. She ignored his feelings.
Later,
Diesel
[Report This]Date: September 19 2016 1:10 PM Title: 3 inches (Astronaut Barbie)
That was the most refreshingly p.c. depiction of a shrunken adult man/pre-adolescent giantess interaction that I have ever read, here. Bravo!!! :-)
Date: September 16 2016 4:09 AM Title: 4 inches (Enbosomed, pt 2)
I enjoyed the run in with Paul. For him to be standing there like a boy looking up at a woman, it must have been humiliating and frustrating. Will there be another run in with Paul when he is maybe much smaller? Or maybe a separate chapter showing his life not going so well. Maybe he has a less forgiving babysitter.
Just wondering,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Patience, loyal reader! Paul still has a lot of shrinking to do.
[Report This]Date: September 15 2016 12:27 PM Title: 4 inches (Enbosomed, pt 2)
To paraphrase Alice in Wonderland: "Things are getting seriouser and seriouser."
[Report This]Date: September 13 2016 11:47 PM Title: 4 inches (Enbosomed, pt 1)
This story has been great throughout and its getting even better now that they're together and he's getting really small. Keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: September 13 2016 1:10 PM Title: 4 inches (Enbosomed, pt 1)
Very erotic and exciting this chapter. I like the part where Kim think about her sexual power, and how it overwhelms the one she loves most. May make her feel even more empowered.
I can't help but to notice, other than sexual, she also is starting to satisfy her maternal urges with him at this size. Since she thought that wanted several kids in the future. Wonder if keeping him like that, even smaller, may sate her need to have kids later on. Or something like this.
Date: September 13 2016 3:25 AM Title: 4 inches (Enbosomed, pt 1)
Love Kim's ideas for games. If I were him I would have enjoyed the trip to the store also. Were you once a swimmer?
Later,
Diesel
Date: September 13 2016 12:01 AM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
very great! i enjoy reading this and come back for each update.
are any unaware chapters with brooke on the cards? really like unaware content you see :D
Author's Response:
I'm trying to find a way to work in an unaware chapter with Paul and Kimberly, but putting Brooke into the mix would be intriguing. Gotta wait for Paul to get tiny, though.