[Report This]Date: September 09 2016 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 4 ... 9-8-16
Frankly, it's 50/50, at best, that she's telling the truth. I mean, on the one hand, Addie _did_ lie about going to the local mall. On the other hand, Brian might be reaching the age where he's starting to notice that not _all_ older girls are as icky as his sister. So, in his opinion, it's time to start surfing the forbidden zones of the Internet!*
*The ones that require a credit-card holder over 18 years-old.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comments. I’d give the same odds as you… 50/50. And Brian could be the one, too.
[Report This]Date: September 09 2016 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 4 ... 9-8-16
That was an awesome chapter. Cant wait for the next!
Author's Response:
Thanks for commenting. I'm happy you thought that was an awesome chapter. Thanks again.
[Report This]Date: September 08 2016 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 4 ... 9-8-16
Really enjoying the character development and the slower buildup. The sense of anticipation for the shrinking and interaction is high. I hope you stick with this one. Easily your best written work so far. I'm liking the weekly chapter release schedule
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for your nice comments. I'm glad the gradual buildup is one of anticipation and enjoyment.
Date: September 08 2016 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 4 ... 9-8-16
I am anxiously awaiting playtime with Adelaide. I always feel a surge of excitement when I see this story updated. Mooooore :D
Author's Response:
I have a sense of when James will become small, and how it could happen. Thanks for commenting.