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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2016 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 9 ... 10-13-16

Somehow, I get the feeling that Addie will be more amused and flattered than angry at seeing his 'nads at full mast.

Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting.  I'd say your feeling is right.

Reviewer: smuttymcsmutpants Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2016 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 9 ... 10-13-16

Once again, you're a master of building up the tension between James and Addie! Although they barely interacted directly in this chapter, I loved how humiliated he was by his stepdaughter and wife's conversation, as well as James's attempt at relaxing horribly backfiring on him. Personally I'm hoping that since Addie's noticed the effect her breasts had on her little stepfather, she puts him back with them to force him to finish what he started, but either way I'm really looking forward to what direction this goes.

Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting.  Yes, James needs a release, and Addie is in a unique situation.

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