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Reviewer: Happy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2016 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 11 ... 10-27-16

Curious how Karen just left James with Addie while she tool Brian away. I figured she wouldn't want to let him out of her sight.

Anyway, it's cool how you bring James and Addis into a more level relationship in this chapter. She's still a sadistic bitch, but the tension is tamped down. All the chapters until the mall scene very nearly gave me a heart attack. I felt like I was James, and all his anxiety and insecurities were my anxiety and insecurities. Very well done.

The way Addie talks about being James's mommy is weird and erotic. Good luck realizing the potential of that fantasy.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for commenting.  The thought entered my mind that Karen shouldn't leave little James alone with her daughter... but I wanted some alone time between Addie and James.  I figured Karen was too afraid of Brian accidentally seeing him, while watching the dog and her son, so it was the better of two bad choices.

I'm glad you found tension in the tense parts earlier in the story.  Chapter 11 allowed for some change in how the characters interact.  Thanks again.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2016 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 11 ... 10-27-16

Amazing!

I think my favorite part was actually when Addie was describing what she would do with Jim. Especially when she mentioned Karen. Also, the fact that they would share him. That sounds like fun.

I wonder how you will make Karen get interested in this. Will you take the easy way and have Addie put Jim in Karen's bra or panties and Karen will realize that the pleasure is from Jim? Or will you make some creative situation where Addie verbally convinces Karen to "take him for the night"?

Interesting to see Addie wants to run the family, but she also wants to take her mom up with her. Addie just wants Jim below her and wants Karen to believe that as well. I like it.

Haha! I like how they have to kick out Brian for their fun. I think it would be funnier if they have to keep hiding Jim from Brian, but this works too.

The mouth play was good. I like how she used a lollipop to make the experience even better. I bet it smelled nice with the sucker in there as well. I was thinking that she could have stuck the wet sucker on Jim's back and then his front will be exposed for Addie to lick.

I like it when Addie talks dirty. The way she mentions about giving him to his wife. The way she wants to control him. The way she specially doesn't want to enlarge him. Next, she should describe where she will put him and for how long he will be there and that there is no escape.

My favorite thing about giantess stories are when they use panties. I think Addie seems like a kinky girl who is into some bondage and maybe she will tie up little Jim. Once these 2 giantesses get aroused, then the real fun begins!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for your comments.  I'm not sure how Karen would change, but probably through dialogue and some natural events.  Whatever seems fun and interesting.  I liked your sucker ideas... and bondage sounds good.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2016 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 11 ... 10-27-16

Little Jim said it best: "WOW!"

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot.  I appreciate it.

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