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Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2016 9:08 PM Title: Gina's Revenge

Love the way you implemented George!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I thought that George might be the best example since they had similiar height in at least one class. Plus his flaws gave me the perfect excuse for what I used. Many thanks for the review and the five stars!

Reviewer: Paris Green Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2016 8:53 PM Title: Gina's Revenge

I might sound like a broken record but the second chapter is a major improvement from the first. Did a good job characterizing George as a nervous clutz and Gina as a woman with barely a hair of patience. 

I'm looking forward to seeing more of Gina in future shorts. Be cool to learn more about her as a character as well how far she takes payback until she sees it as "even". 



Author's Response:

Good to know that improvement was made (I do feel that the first chapter was a bit rushed). As for seeing Gina in future shorts, she will most certainly be around. Sorry for the late reply, forgot to check reviews for a while.

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