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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2017 2:31 PM Title: The Man with the Plan

Lol! Code word is squirell! There is no way the girls will get that one. Unless, by some odd chance they think "Aw, Tiny Stan looks like a cute squirell! Let's send a pic to Deacon to show him how cute he is" (texting Deacon). "Hey, Deacon. Local singles in your area. It's your local Omega girls that live several feet away. Tap this icon to join is. You can enjoy what little Stan here is getting. Doesn't he look like a wittle squirrell. ;) We would love to play soon.

Otherwise, the code word is all set and I like how cautious Stan is at arriving at this situation. Deacon seems a bit intimidated, but Stan shows no fear as he charges into the house.

Monroe is an Omega Pi girl and now Deacon better watch out. I thought she was innocent but now she is also a seductress. Also, who woukdve thought of Monroe as a stunning gorgeous girl. I thought she was good looking, but Stan saw her as a goddess.

Also, we don't know that the grey haired woman is Mrs. Frost. Could be someone else, probably Mrs frost but we can't gaurenttee it. Also, we don't know what happened between Stan and Mrs Frost when he was a boy. In addition, we see the effects of life being transferred from the shrunken men to women like Mrs. Frost.

Now Allie and Brroklyn are coming down to meet Stan. I bet Stan would fall over for Brooklyn. Ha! These girls are trying to seduce him to get him to do what they want. Stan respects their beauty, but I don't think he will fall into their traps as easily.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2017 9:38 AM Title: The Man with the Plan

Stan's actions will dictate if the sisters percieve him to be a threat to the local house and the sorority as a whole.  If Allie, Edith and the rest see him as a danger, how do they respond?  This can't be the first time this kind of situation has played out in the history of the Omegas.  Do the sisters personally take action or maybe there is a protector, someone that takes out any threat. Maybe a call is made to Samantha to call him off.  Stan is a bull dog who has sunk his teeth in and isn't letting go...

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2017 4:43 AM Title: The Man with the Plan

Why am I thinking “holy shit?”

     I really don’t want Stan to run.  But I really don’t want him caught by these harpies.  God, this is so unfair.  Stoopid ‘megs.

     I like Stan’s presence in the story.  He’s really adding a great perspective.  I really like that he and Deacon have chemistry.  That is a great touch, orphan and fill-in father hitting it off.  Of course, now that we know Stan is also an orphan, we see him being a great parent because...maybe because his own dad had to step it up without mom there, maybe.  If dad wasn't around, maybe he's trying to give Oliver what he never had.  That is amazing.
     It makes me wonder if the ‘Megs are going out of their way to target really great guys.  Clearly they aren’t that picky, look at Bear, but if they get the chance to destroy the decent guy or the douche bag...it looks like they aim high.  That explains why it seems like there are so many jerks in the world today. 

     Frost is spooky.  We know there’s a rumor that she doesn’t need the weeping stones, but remember the business with the arm bands?  Does she need his consent?  3 times even?

     She might be tempted to rush things.  Not get permission.  What happens then?  Try and see things as she might see them, Oliver escapes and then Stan shows up, Stan is another “one who got away.”  She might just see this as the universe saying “dig in.”

     However, usually someone like Stan wouldn’t live to see 19.  But, here’s Stan, mature and experience and manifesting a pretty clear danger sense.  What else might he have up his sleeve that even he doesn’t know about? 

    And tactically, he’s only stepped into the foyer.  That means he only has to take one or two steps back and he’s on the steps or leaning on the door frame again.  Make them do what they’re gonna do where there are possible witnesses.

     So while he’s in a great deal of possible danger, he’s not completely screwed.  And he’s not stupid.

     We get to say “Go Stan” and not just hope.

     Tense situation in a super cool chapter Duggernaut.  Thanks for sharing this.

pix

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2017 9:30 PM Title: The Man with the Plan

What a wonderful chapter of revelations.  Firstly, you have to love Stan's personality and way of cutting through the crap.  I liked the way he kept Deacon clear of trouble and did not reveal his experience with "Oliver" not properly responding to his tease. I loved his interaction with Monroe, refusing to take “no” for an answer.  Now, the interesting part.  Edith knew Stan's mother which would make his mother an Omega and Stan the son of an Omega not yet sacrificed to the sisters. Edith clearly put two and two together and in my opinion, will want to make up for lost time with Stan.  Stan will need to watch his back because the sisters will be coming for him. Now it's getting interesting!  More please...

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2017 9:24 PM Title: The Man with the Plan

Ugh, I've been waiting so long for Oliver to be in the clutches of one of the girls, and yet another chapter pushing that back? YOu really are trying to save that event. It's crazy, 78 chapters in and our main character still hasn't had an aware giantess interaction. It must be some kind of record.

But seriously, great story man. Right now, Stan is playing his cards perfectly. He even has his contingency code word. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2017 9:16 PM Title: The Man with the Plan

Whoa! Mrs. Frost knew Stan's grandmother?! This conspiracy _does_ go back a long way.

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