Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2017 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 6

More Miss Velasco . Especially as he gets smaller. Nice story.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2016 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 6

Whoa, Eli's getting himself into some bad places, hanging around after school with the troubled kids.  He should have kissed Zoey and rekindled that old flame, ...maybe, she really wanted him to become even smaller, ..rather than wanting a taller boyfriend like Eli first thought?

  Parker's going to step into that role if Eli allows her to; she seems to be fascinated with the idea of him becoming smaller.  I like the fact that he's brave enough to even venture back into the school and attempt to continue his normal routine.  This is starting to become interesting now, ...nice character development.

  I can't wait for Eli to get down below a foot tall, ...this is going to be a good one, I can feel it already!  ;`)

Author's Response:

Interesting thoughts on Zoey. At least she signed up to help watch him at school, so we'll probably get to see more of her intentions. As for a foot tall, that may thake a little time, but it's getting there. I'll try to make it worth the wait. :)