Date: February 01 2017 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 15
I predict that we'll see examples of binding in other stories on this site over the next few months, and it will settle into a regularly used trope. Great addition to the genre.
Author's Response:
Haha, I'm sure something similar has been used before. Nothing new under the sun. :) Thanks!
[Report This]Date: January 31 2017 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 15
@pkong. Those hypnoses only seem to work in the previous stages. Now that his mind is back, he is now in the adjusting period.
Again a very good chapter. This relationship of 3 seems interesting. I hope Eli find the happiness with her/them he wants, but that seems to be difficult. Wonder how you will let that develop. I sense a fear in Parker.
Have a couple of possible outcomes in my head.
I can say the same for every chapter. Wonderfull characters that all feel realistic and relatable. Winter, Ally, Eli, Parker very well written. He has very kind sisters. Very understanding and protecting has well being.
Good subtle hints you give of the sadness of his sisters and Parker about the situation.
I will read your Fyth stories too. I don't mind soft vore. The story is what I find important and the characters. It must progress too and not get stuck too long in fetish mode and/or turn in unrealistic characters/behaviour.
By the way, love the renders too. Look forward too the next chapter what Eli will encounter in this very interesting new alien world.
Author's Response:
Well his regression stages are over. As Parker explained, the 'hypnosis' really isn't hypnosis. But it's difficult to describe until you've experienced it.
As for my Fyth stories, I plan on creating pictures for Fyth Farmhand eventually.
As for YouTube, I try to keep the unrealistic parts to the one thing that's allowed to be unrealistic -- the state of becoming and being a premie. The binding/regression parts got a pass because they're both related to the premie phenomenon. While a teenager talking about polyamory seems unrealistic, it's debatable. For example, it seems like the most radical concepts (e.g., gender exlporation) originate from teens these days. Sometimes they're not sure what they want. Sometimes they're sure. So it's conceivable...Parker's feelings. There's really still a lot we don't know about her in general.
Date: January 31 2017 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 15
Man, your guy just can't catch a break! I thought he actually had some very good points to argue. I can see why they wouldn't want him running around on the floor when they don't know where he is, but locking him in his house is too far. If you lose too much freedom whats the point of living?
Of course then he had to screw it up by proving how irresponsible he is...
Also, did you really have to give them the power of hypnosis? As if they didn't have enough power over the poor guy. heh.
Author's Response:
He did kind of screw it up, didn't he? I suppose he does act a bit childish still at times.
We'll learn more about binding in the next chapter. It was Eli's first experience with it, and Parker's quite talented at dealing with premies, so he was at a disadvantage. Also, it was his first time being grabbed by a giant person.
Thanks for the review!
Date: January 31 2017 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 15
awesome story. i love the pictures as well
Author's Response:
Excellent. The pictures are fun to create.
Date: January 31 2017 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 15
woah. A threesome between Parker, Zoey, and Eli? Can one premie handle two full-sized girlfriends? This'll be interesting. So are they bound whenever they are picked up in a fist like that. It'l be hard to carry him without binding him if that's the case. I'm really interested for when/if Eli gets to meet Parker's dad. I'm sure it would be healthy for Eli to interact with another person his size. There at the end, I feel so bad for Eli. It's gonna be so emberassing for him to be caught like that. Also, Ally's gonna want to know how he got out. Eli will be pissed if they tape the window shut or something.
PS I love that picture of Ally holding Eli. You can see the contemplativeness in her eyes.
Author's Response:
Should learn more about binding in the next chapter. The meeting with Parker's dad occurred in the chapter I tossed out. However that's not to say he won't be making an appearance.