Date: September 03 2022 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
One of the best unaware stories I've ever read!
[Report This]Date: November 04 2018 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Is this going to be finished? I wanna see how Sara’s fate ends. Micro size drowning in Krystal’s foot sweat? I’m sure you got something!!
Date: March 06 2018 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
I would love to see more of this story and hopefully more unaware lol. I miss seeing your name pop up with this one being updated. Hope all is well :)
Date: October 06 2017 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Hey don’t forget about this story! Was hoping for a death by butt ending! ;)
[Report This]Date: April 15 2017 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Not done reading it but it is a very good story
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!
I'll be sure to check out your stories once I have a bit more time to read them as well. :D
Date: April 14 2017 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
One of the best scenario descriptions I've read on ass play. If someone has to die I vote it is by ass! Thanks again for the time you have put into this story.
[Report This]Date: March 24 2017 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
I'm glad you like my idea of Sara possibly dying from the smell of a foot. Feel free to use it here or elsewhere! I think it works here because of how you write the scene of her in the sock and shoe awhile back. I just picture this puny little wimp being kneaded and squeezed under those athletic ties. If Sara was the size of a grain of rice or half of one, she'd just be engulfed and devoured in those stinky crevices and folds.
[Report This]Date: March 23 2017 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
I hope she gets shrunk small enough that Krystal finishes her underfoot without ever realizing it!! Poor girl wouldn't hurt her but she'll never know!
[Report This]Date: March 23 2017 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
I want Sara to die from being forced to smell one of their feet. Maybe have her shrink more so that it's too much for her.
Author's Response:
Ooo! I like this idea, I'm gonna steal it. ;) Can't promise it'll happen to Sara, but this might be fun in a gym or other physical setting.
Date: March 10 2017 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
I'm kinda hoping Sarah doesn't die, kinda ended up sympathizing with her a lot. Maybe have her end up as someone else's pet or something.
Author's Response:
I feel that way too a little bit, but I had set out on the intent of her not surviving to begin with, and Jeanne doesn't seem to me like the person who would have that big of a change of heart.
Maybe in the future, I'll spare one of my tinies as a pet...
[Report This]Date: March 09 2017 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
More brilliant work. Your story has combined the best of aware and unaware to make a fantastic read. My thoughts are with you and your family. All the best, be strong.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!
[Report This]Date: March 09 2017 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Sending all the best wishes to you, your wife and your family, always a difficult time to handle.
I'm really glad this story is back! It's so entertaining to read despite me not being the biggest feet fan. I'm definitely on the booty bus for how Sara is to be killed but I know you'll do a great job either way!
Author's Response:
Thank you.
And yeah, booty is defintely high on the list for ways to end it. ;)
Date: March 09 2017 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Been adoring this story and just been too lazy to submit a review of it but sorry to hear about the at home situation, sounds tough but just hang in there. I couldn't even begin to understand the stress you're locked up in but all the best of wishes. Now for the story- I've pivoted with delight on the ass portions of the story but despite not being a fan of feet I must say you've got me hooked on warming up to the idea of playing with them more but i'd def' enjoy an anal death!
Author's Response: Thanks, the IRL stuff has given us a roller coaster ride this past month. Thankfully, the wife and I aren't at each other's throats, so it's not all bad! And I wasn't much of a foot person either, but I played with the idea a little bit, and it's a nice change of pace sometimes. Death by booty might have to wait for another story though, I have other plans for Sara (not that she won't be under an ass before then though).
Date: January 21 2017 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
If Sara is going to die it should 100% be a booty death. Perhaps insertion/sofocation? Or perhaps made into some underwear for Krstal?? Either way it seems like butt related content is popular here so...
Author's Response:
Gahhh! I'm torn between death by vore, or death by butt!
[Report This]Date: January 20 2017 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
I know you're probably already set on killing off Sara, but would you consider this idea perhaps?
Jeanne, in her greed for wanting to keep the necklace decides that it would be in her best interests to try and shrink Beth down with it so that she can have two toys and can then keep the necklace for herself.
But Beth has more than just the necklace and is immune to it's effects, so as punishment for her attempts, Beth decides it appropriate to restore Sara and shrink Jeanne. Giving Jeanne to Sara as a way to make amends.
I have to say though, outside of all of this, as a booty lover. I really enjoyed reading your story. :)
Don't know if you'd like it, but I've a story called Moving In that you may like. ;)
Author's Response:
I think because of Jeanne's hatred for Sara, she's gonna get killed one way or another. Not sure if I want Jeanne to be that selfish though. That being said, it would make a pretty good sub-plot with Beth, hope you don't mind if I integrate it into a chapter or two. :D
Booty lovers unite! I felt like it was one of the categories on here that needed some loving, so I focused on it with several chapters. Glad you've enjoyed it so far.
and yes, I have read it! Only downside is that it was one chapter. :P
Date: January 20 2017 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Keep sara alive i think krystal should find her and help her get revenge on jeanne
Author's Response:
The issue i have with this scenario is they're siblings, they have gotten along pretty well, and there is no bad blood between them. Having Krystal turn on Jeanne doesn't make much sense to the storyline, even if Krystal would be empathetic to Sara (she probably would).
now, that doesn't mean i won't do a revenge-based plot in the future. It would actually be a fun narrative to write.
[Report This]Date: January 19 2017 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Really enjoying the story! I would personally love it if Sarah's 'fitting' end involved an unaware krystal... maybe Jeanne puts Sarah on a less sheltered spot of krystals dildo, or possible krystal mistakes Sarah for a bug an unknowingly tortures her...
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll keep this in mind, maybe she'll have another chapter with Krystal, either before or when she finally dies.
Date: January 19 2017 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
If it's to end, I'd personally love for Sara to be reduced to a miniscule dust scale and condemned to spend the rest of her time on either Jeanne or an unaware Krystal's feet or asshole, gradually being forgotten about. Just my 2 cents. :)
Author's Response: Not sure I'll have her shrink below 1/2 inch, as this is going to be a limitation of the amulet in future stories. But an unaware death at Krystal's hand might be fun...
[Report This]Date: December 16 2016 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
I love everything about this story! The back and forth between Sara and Krystal is done really well. The descrptions are so vivid I can see it all perfectly. It's really nice to see some good quality F/f content out there!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! I think keeping Krystal as unaware is great, because I can play with both the unaware aspects, as well as aware time with Jeanne.
[Report This]Date: December 16 2016 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Great story! I loved the latest chapter. Unaware is my personal fave so thank you! As for ideas, I would love to see some more unaware Krystal and maybe some unaware from her sister. Maybe a plot line where Sara tries to escape, gets caught in clothing and has to remain still as to avoid capture. Becoming trapped in the private areas of either sister is also an idea. Maybe she gets shrunken down really small and visits past the cervix. But that's just rambling, your story your rules.
Author's Response: I think Jeanne is too intelligent to not notice Sara, at least within a few minutes. But more unaware Krystal is definitely in the works! As for super small (under a 1/2 inch), that will probably happen in a different story, I've kinda set Sara's minimum height to that.