[Report This]Date: December 16 2016 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
I love this story and have a request. Maybe for the gym chapter or a future chapter. Can you have Jeanne shrink Sara to Super Small where Krystal's foot sweat is like a lake/ocean to her and she has to swim out of it? If not just super micro small unaware feet stuff where Jeanne maybe first mocks Sarah saying Krystal would toetally help you if she knew, but you're so small she'll never notice you!
Author's Response: A gym/cheerleading chapter is definitely coming with Jeanne, and probably an unaware gym trip with Krystal too.
I don't know if I'll go micro (less than 1/2 inch) with Sara, but it's a possibility with another story I'm working on.
Date: December 15 2016 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Love this story so much! Any chance we could see some more pantyhose foot action at some point?
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! Hmm... not sure if Krystal and Jeanne are the pantyhose type of girls. Sara is headed for more of a gym environment in the next few chapters though. Running track can be such a drag... But, I think I can make that idea work for my upcoming Christmas chapter with Angela. Maybe some nice snowflake pantyhose for our beloved little witches?
[Report This]Date: November 24 2016 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Still the best story on this site so far. I'm really enjoying the unaware aspects, and as for some more fodder for idea I would recommend something to do with unaware. You haven't explored the sexual organs of either girl that much, maybe something unaware with Krystal and that new guy she got a number for? we also haven't seen any indication that it isn't just the tqo sisters in the house. I think also a little unaware with Jeene, (i forget how to spell her name, sorry) and Sara could be cool. If you haven't figured out already, I like unaware. Unaware and the protagonist living at the end of the story are my two favorite things about stories.
Besides ideas, there's a typo in your first chapter where you call her Krystals older sister by a different name.
Author's Response: Why thank you! ^.^ I feel like I still have a ways to go to complete with some of the veterans on the site (Duggernaut, Mr. E, to name a few). As for the typo in the first chapter, HOLYCRAPHOWDIDIMISSTHAT? It's been fixed, thanks for pointing it out. I think unaware will be staying with Krystal, but I do have plans for Sara to be a sex toy for both (thinking strapped to one of Krystal's toys might be fun).
[Report This]Date: November 23 2016 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
My suggestions would be:
Toenail cleaning/entrapment
Navel entrapment (the girls are active, so sit-ups?)
More unaware asshole stuff
Somethink with urine (maybe even urethra insertion)
Re:the death vs captivity thing, the lattee would be preferable by far. If you have somethink you enjoy playing with, you wouldn't get rid of it.
Author's Response: Toenail - maybe. At Sara's size it's not really practical, but then again, she IS Jeanne's slave. Navel - Oooh! That's a unique one, I definitely will see if that one fits in somewhere. Ass - That's already in the works. Think Sara tied to one of Krystal's toys. Urine - I'm not sure that will end up in this story. Most likely, I'll end up doing a more violent/nasty story that would include it, among others.
Date: November 22 2016 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Continually great stuff. Superb!
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: November 17 2016 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Really loving the recent chapters, man. Human vibrator and hints at vore... Yowzaaaa. You've got a tremendous talent for writing here. Well done!
Date: November 16 2016 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
I've been waiting for someone to write this kind of story with all the things I fantasize about. I am a fan of every chapter you wrote especially the part where she's tied to a gstring. That's so hot! Unawarebis great! oh if you could write a chapter where she's literally used as the string part, that would be awesome! Thank you for sharing us this gem. More chapters to come!. Cheers!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoy it so far! There is definitely more unaware coming.
"literally as the string..." Hmm..... I think I like this idea. Might add it to my evil plan. If not with Sara, then maybe woth someone else (a cartain witch perhaps?).
[Report This]Date: November 14 2016 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
That. Was. Amazing.
[Report This]Date: November 13 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Can we get some more unaware feet content? Please :)
Author's Response: Feet will return, and unaware will return (the latter in about 3 chapters when Krystal gets home). Not sure unaware feet will happen, but I'll see what I can do.
Date: November 13 2016 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Superb! Having her be trapped in there all day is amazing. Can't wait for more!
Date: November 10 2016 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Non a huge fan of unaware myself but just the awarest chapter with Jeanne was awesome. I will keep a close eye on this one now tho 🙂
[Report This]Date: November 09 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
I quite enjoyed this story. Normally I don't enjoy foot stuff, but for this story I did.
I havn't seen any good unaware stuff recently either. Keep this up.
Though I still don't like odor, I have to mentally edit that out.
Author's Response:
Foot isn't really my thing either to be honest, but it felt fitting for the story. The unaware will be returning in a cpuple of chapters, i have one penned but it's out of sequence, so patience!
As for the odor, there will be a few that dont have it, but you noght not enjoy the next chapter or two, fair warning.
[Report This]Date: November 08 2016 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Love this story! Was hoping she was going to end up lost in a pubic forest at some point, but perhaps in the futrure unaware chapter...
Author's Response:
That's one chapter I haven't even started yet, as I'm debating whether it would be more fun aware or not. It will probably happen though in a future chapter.
Date: November 04 2016 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Still can't think of anything unpetty. Formatting could use some work, but again, its a nitpick. Hope to see aware soon!
Author's Response:
the next chapters have a change to the format, partly due to a change in the pace. Should make for a more fluid reading.
Date: November 04 2016 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Hey there! Just be came a member here, and took a particular liking to your style of writing. Excellent story so far! I am looking forward to Sara's unaware status ending soon though...going to make for some entertaining content if she is forced back into some butt or feet situations again! Absolutely in love with the plot so far, keep it up!
Author's Response:
Butts i can guarantee will return, i already have a chunk of that chapter written! Feet are also likely, dont have anything written for it yet though.
[Report This]Date: November 04 2016 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Please keep it Unaware! There seems to be a shortage of good, well thought out Unaware stories and I must say, your work is great. The detail is great and it is all very grammatically correct. Thank you for an amazing story so far.
My only wish is for it to stay unaware, but that is ultimately your decision.
Author's Response:
I plan to have a few more chapters that have some unaware in them (I have like 3 partially finished chapters thay take place relatively soon), but there will be aware soon.
Date: October 22 2016 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
This story is fanatastic! You've got a great style to your writing.
Unaware is my personal favourite, when you throw some butt stuff in to the story too it's a guaranteed winner.
Thanks for this one!
Author's Response:
Why thank you! There doesn't seem to be enough unaware butt out there, so I figured I could try to fill the void (no pun intended).
Date: October 21 2016 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Great stuff! Looking forward to the bike ride!
Date: October 18 2016 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Great chapter. Loved it.
Later,
Diesel