Reviewer: amazonianniall Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2016 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Waterboarding

Glad to see another chapter on this one. Definately one of my favourite stories already.

I'm excited to see where you go next with it.

I'd think it best to keep Krystal unaware for the entire story. Any discovery or aware interactions can be done with Jeanne and it still leaves you the opportunity to explore unaware situations with Krystal whenever you like.

My 2 cents.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: It's starting to turn out that Krystal will be unaware for a majority of the story (not sure yet how I plan to end it all yet, so it may be the entire story).