Reviews For Sara's Misfortune
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Reviewer: adamnight Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2016 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Stuck in the Middle

really like this story, but chapters are a bit too short. maybe combine two each or three into one instead of adding short ones.



Author's Response:

Appreciate the feedback. I was aiming for a chapter length of 1500-2500 words, to keep it more segregated (note each chapter has only 1-2 themes), but I can work on making them a bit longer.

Reviewer: GhostWriter44 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09 2016 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Stuck in the Middle

I'm actually enjoying the non-unaware aspects of this story! So if you want to continue with that, just know you have a fan of it here :)



Author's Response:

Glad you like it! The next 3-4 chapters will be mostly aware (depends on if Jeanne misplaces Sara or not), so more is coming!

 

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2016 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Stuck in the Middle

would love to see her stick up the "bug" into her ass, great story so far, keep it up



Author's Response:

Then you are gonna love the next few chapters. 

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