Reviewer: Chris Hallow Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2016 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Jeanne's Turn

Hey there! I think your skills of descriptiveness (why does that sound weird) is on another level! I could very easily see the situation that you were describing, much too my pleasure. *cue lewd face* As a fledgling writer, I'd appreciate some pointers in my newest story! "It's a yes from me."

Author's Response: If you enjoyed it, my mission is complete. ;) I'll give you story a thorough read in the next few days, so far I've only skimmed it, but it's pretty good for a first story!