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Reviewer: xefron Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2017 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 26 Warming Up To It

Death by vore is my suggested method to kill her if she must die though.

Reviewer: xefron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2017 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 26 Warming Up To It

Dont kill Sara. Kill Jeanne instead. She deserves it for being such a bitch. Dont care how you do it, but it sounds like a better ending than evil bitch kills for selfish reasons. 



Author's Response: Oh, I agree, Jeanne deserves it. But life isn't fair, is it? ;) In this story, I won't be killing off the tormentor, but it's an idea I'll keep for a future story. Sounds like it might be a fun dynamic to try!

Reviewer: ionflame Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2017 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 26 Warming Up To It

Please dont kill her! 

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

*mini screams of distress* 

More unaware? Hero gets trapped somewhere until she can be safelty unshrunk after your Beth storyline? Then Jeane gets unawarely treated by Krystal? That'd be cool. 

Please. 

 



Author's Response: lol, you're the only one who wants her to live. :P I'm not sure if I'll have another unaware chapter in this story, but I do have a one-off story that's almost completely unaware. I think you'll like it, provided I get off my lazy ass and finish it.

Reviewer: GhostWriter44 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2017 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 26 Warming Up To It

My top pick for how Sara should meet her fate is being swallowed whole by Jeanne. My second choice is being squashed by Jeanne's barefoot. Either way, I'm sure it'll be awesome :)

Author's Response: Well, that's two for eaten so far!

Reviewer: GuyGoneSmall Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2017 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 26 Warming Up To It

Very nice foot action.  I loved it!   If you are looking to kill off Sara maybe this.  Jeanne puts Sara in her sock and balls it up when she gets home.  Then she throws it into the laundry hamper and Krystal unknowingly puts the laundry in the washing machine and ends up killing her.  Jeanne secretyly watches this and silently rejoices possibly?  is that a good idea?  Maybe its one of those washing machines where its a front loader instead of a top loader???  With the clear door so you can accuratly describe what Sara sees in the last moments.  Maybe???



Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it! A washer..... that's an interesting way to go. Don't know if I've even seen that one done on here before...

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2017 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 26 Warming Up To It

Great chapter!



Author's Response: Thank you! ^.^

Reviewer: MadHatter Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2017 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 26 Warming Up To It

To be honest? I don't think she should realistically survive Jeanne. She has been trying to kill her this whole time through her sister and seems pretty set on her disappearing. Her being eaten feels like the end she was headed for since Jeanne has repeatedly commented on her tasting good... but maybe I'm just biased lol.



Author's Response: I don't think she'll survive either, I'm kinda evil that way. :P And yes, she is pretty tasty, it's one of the favorite choices for her demise at the moment too.

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