Date: March 21 2022 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
This story is amazing! It would be so cool to see like reference pics for each of the girls:)
Author's Response:
Thank you, I posted some renders from two artists on DeviantArt for anyone that wants to see.
Date: February 17 2022 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Also, you got a pdf or the like for this story?
Author's Response: Not at the moment.
[Report This]Date: February 17 2022 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Every single girl had to be a psycho in that dorm room, huh? I would have liked at least one gentle girl. Also, I know you said you don't want them to be shrunken, but they have a lot of bad karma, so even if there were just a chapter where they suffer in mundane manners (murder, assault etc) would be a nice catharsis since knowing these bitches are living the good life doesn't leave a pleasant feeling. Still good cruel content throughout the story.
Author's Response:
I mean, I felt like every girl was cruel in their own different ways. I thought it would take away from the realism if they were to be punished. These girls had absolute power and the lesson was that they never got punished. I know in future stories, there will be characters who I dedicate to being gentle.
Date: February 05 2022 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Hi panzer,I am a fan of yours in China and although I am not very good at reading English, I can feel how great your writing and ideas are. I would like to see more stories from this universe. Can I translate it into Chinese and upload it to the Chinese forum?
Other than that, can I give you a few suggestions? I would like to see more stories that happen in this universe. I hope this time the story can be a little bit gentler and have a good ending. You could also use real life celebrities as the main characters, I'm sure that would be great!
Author's Response:
I don't think I could use real life celebrities, but there might be a story including people based off of celebrities coming in the future.
Date: December 11 2021 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
I really like this article very much. I wonder if you will write an article about Gulliver's world view. I am looking forward to it!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: August 13 2020 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
I really hope this story goes on forever, I feel like there's a lot to work with. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
There's definetely a time and a place to end a story, but I have a lot more planned for this for sure. There's just too many things to tie up before I think about the actual end.
[Report This]Date: May 02 2020 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
So glad to see you're back! I'm always happy to see you post again! Great chapter btw ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: February 27 2020 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
This is fascinating. I'm impressed by the scale of it; the various characters, the shifting perspectives. Multiple parts stand out to me - this is really good. Excited to see where it goes.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm curious as to what parts stand out for you.
[Report This]Date: January 24 2020 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Great to know you're making chapters again. Love this story!
[Report This]Date: October 31 2019 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Ok what is the tech level of the micros? If they have advanced education or an industrail base they should be able to deal with Jessica and Isabella. Hell world war two tech would be sufficent. Nerve agents would be ideal in how they would end those two B(s) are no more difficult to produce then other industrial chemicals (other then some safety, but when millions are dying, well corners can be cut) and could be produced even by nanos in sufficent quanity to easily kill their oppressiers.
Hoping those two get the twitching justice they deserve!
fairly decent story! Thank you.
Author's Response:
I get that. But im just writing to entertain and carry on the story and everyone's favorite characters. Realism kind of goes out the door when it comes to miles tall women.
It wouldnt be a super fun story if the first interaction is a tiny city using toxic gas on a giant woman. Admittingly to me it would be pretty funny, but I cant write that hahaha
Date: May 13 2019 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
This is the best of all the stories I've read.Hope there will be a sequel!
Author's Response:
I don't know about a sequel, but I will for sure get as much of the story out as I can!
Date: July 06 2018 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
I really hope Isabelle makes a return
Author's Response:
She will, I have a few things planned for her character, so dont worry about that
[Report This]Date: May 12 2018 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Started reading last night from first chapter to last, and I love it. Love the detail you out into the story and the characters, and I really love those vore scenes, especially the last one where the people we're eaten in Miranda food like they were nothing. Miranda must have been in for a surprise when finding out she ate her citizens. I love how she shrugged it off though :)
I wonder what Ana's dream was... ;)
Author's Response: I appreciate the kind words. What really helps me build the story are review and feedback like this. I had no idea a lot of people really like the vore stuff so I’ll be putting more and more in. As for Ana’s dream, well... I couuuuld tell you, but..
Date: May 07 2018 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Hey great story! Love the variety in personality of the girls.
Jessica is my favorite. It would be awesome if she came into possession of even a tinier civilization like Lacy's.
Author's Response: Thank you!! There’s always a possibility in the future...
Date: April 24 2018 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
I hope you add more sometime. This is an amazing read all the way from 1 to 33
Author's Response:
There will be more soon, I promise.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2018 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Been a lurker of this story for around a year but never got the chance to login and review. I must say that this GTS/Shrink story is one of the best I've ever read, and the character build up is amazing. Every chapter is been very interesting to read, and your writing skills are quality.
10/10
Author's Response:
I appreciate you taking the time to write such kind words!
I hope your review encourages other lurkers to send messages about the chapters and things they like about the story, it gives me more motivation and to write things based on peoples interests. Thanik you!
Date: January 12 2018 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Hi
very very very good story
i love miranda character very much
Author's Response:
More Miranda and Ana on the way!
[Report This]Date: September 23 2017 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Been lurking this story for a while. Just thought I'd drop by and say that it's one of the best GTS stories I've ever read!
Extremely creative and detailed, and I'm very much enjoying it :) 10/10!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words! I really try to put detail into each chapter, sometimes it gets slow because of that, I know, but I'm really glad you're enjoying it! Don't be a stranger, write more reviews and let me know what you like!
Date: July 30 2017 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
boringly texting your friends, while scaring of a mighty army of tanks, planes and hardened veterans with just wiggling you toes.
Now thats what i call a true display of power.
Lol. If even a nuke only serves sexual satisfaction for Jessica, it doesnt look good for the city.
That was there last hope. Jessica is indestructable for them.
There only purpose in life is to serve and entertain a 20 year old girl.
Very good chapter! This story still had a lot of potential.
Im also eager for your other story.
As long as it involves tiny civilizations being dominated by beautifull Woman, you got my attention sir.
Author's Response:
Oh, my new story will for sure! Glad you liked the new chapter!
Date: July 12 2017 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Still hoping for more submission and worshiping.
The girls have absolute power over the cities, especially over the micro countries.
They can make them do anything they want. Turn them into little slaves, make them worship her like a god.
Some of the cities still dont realize they are just playthings and think they can argue like they are equals. That misplaced attitude can easely be broken.
Serve your goddess or die by your goddess