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Reviewer: TarTar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2016 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The Scale of Things

  Nice update! Good to see things might be really picking up soon. The whole thing's been great so far! I too thought the Jessica part with the skyscraper was my favorite so far, the way she didn't even hesitate to make her intentions clear.. Also I loved Lacy's intimidating, don't-mess-with-us attitude towards Ashton City. I'm liking how there are four (looks like maybe five soon?) main characters, each with different personalities.

  Looking forward to your future updates! I'm curious to see what Anastazja does or what happens to Baleares when she gathers her thoughts. ;)

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