You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2019 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Toy Town

So fucking hot!

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29 2017 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Toy Town

It was strangely erotic how Ana called the city "these... thing." I don't how I didn't see how sexy she was espically with the fact she's naturally taller than most people outside the micro cities. Jessica just seems to get sexier and sexier in every chapter to the point that even her spit was sexy. Also, thank you for your motivation on keeping up with my story! Your too kind for that and I hope you figured out that my previous ratings were suppose to be five stars but for whatever strange reason, they come out as 2.5 stars so here's five rabbits instead! 🐇🐇🐇🐇🐇 as always, keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Arkcrono14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2017 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Toy Town

Just wow... the more cruel stuff the girls do is my favorite. I love seeing a new chapter from this story.

Reviewer: officerkc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2017 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Toy Town

I think this has been my favorite chapter. I was pretty excited to see an update and after reading the chapter all I can say is wow! 



Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words! I really want to show that Jessica has no regard for their lives. They will suffer, either for her, or under her.

You must login (register) to review.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.