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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2019 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Sabotage

Eh, I feel like Ana and Miranda are the only ones who are still truly good at heart. They don't intentionally want to hurt anyone, unlike Lacy and Jessica. Lacy may have been corrupted by her newfound feeling of power, but I believe that Jessica has always been an evil conniving bitch with a severe superiority complex. The only thing is that I’m annoyed that Miranda is toying with her city’s lives by playing along with this “war” instead of just beating Jessica’s ass herself… I really hope Jessica ends up mysteriously shrinking to a tiny speck in Miranda’s or Ana’s room one day and finally see’s what its like to be tiny and helpless. Maybe she’d realize who the real “goddesses” are in the apartment too… ;) lol

 

Reviewer: rabbithole Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2017 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Sabotage

Nice to see this updated. Hope to see more of your work soon.



Author's Response:

Don't worry, I will finish this and start to expand into other ideas I've always wanted to work on

Reviewer: TarTar Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11 2017 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Sabotage

I'd be so disappointed if Lacy just turned her shower on and washed away the bathtub land! But the possibility of Lacy crawling around the kitchen and whatnot on the hunt for whatever civilization she could find sounds exciting.

Mildly sad that Ana didn't fuck up Toy Town (not really though because that means Jess still gets to (maybe)).

Hoping for more soon! Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Toy Town has a much worse fate



Author's Response:

Toy Town has a much worse fate

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