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Date: July 05 2018 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Elle's Reward Part 1

Whoa... I think Elle might be a new contender for my favorite girl after this one. I usually like bigger size differences like Lacy/Biraal, Jessica/Trebizand  and even more so the massive Ana/Baleares size difference, but I love the power-hungry monster that Elle is turning out to be! And like Elle, I also have wondered how Lacy restrains herself from playing with them all the time, but I think that's why I like Elle's scale. She could go on forever since she has millions of people at her disposal whereas Lacy could easily end it all in literal seconds if she isn't careful. Also not gonna lie, I was also getting kinda bummed out like Elle when the bathtub seems to be deserted haha, but the last half of the chapter made it all worth it. I did kind of enjoy Elle's mini quest to find life in the bathtub though. It was a fun twist. This was definitely my favorite chapter in a while.

 

I thought the description of Elle eating them was really good. That's something I love to see any of the girls doing (knowingly devouring the little people by the hundreds and even thousands), not just Elle. 

 

I wanna say that I really admire and respect your dedication to this story and your commitment to finishing it. Very very very rarely do writers make it this far and put this much time and effort into a story, and to be honest I'm not looking forward to the day it finally is done, haha. It's that good. Congrats. It may feel like forever to us between updates but you always come back. Thanks.

 

Anyway I hope part 2 of Elle's blissful rampage comes out sooner rather than later, but either way I will be waiting... 

Author's Response:

Thanl you for the kind words, I hope the mystery that I go into the second part will be interesting for the readers.  I'm glad you like Elle as it's pretty exciting for me to explore the size difference for the people that are considred tiny.  Im glad this was a good chapter for you, and I agree, I dont want this to end, but I have a good amount of planned writing left to do, but unfortunately it will end so I can work on some other stories of giga proportion haha