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Reviewer: Minivoid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2020 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Same Old Story

Been following this story for awhile and I got to say it's a personal favorite. The scenario and character writing has been top-notch and I'm excited to see how Jessica and Lacy's celebration plays out (giant drunk girls are the best!). Anyways, keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Minivoid.  I'm glad you have been following for so long, it's for sure been a long ride.  I agree, drunk giant girls are the best.  

Reviewer: carnage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2020 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Same Old Story

Well, you hit it out of the park again. Jessica is definetely my favorite character, and her business is really interesting and I can't wait to see where that goes. But the dialogue between Miranda and Lacy at the beginning was really well written. Loved that the fleeing micros died from Lacy's actions and Miranda didn't even seem to notice. Well done!



Author's Response:

Such kind words from someone who also has such a great piece of writing, makes me wonder sometimes how a Naomi would handle the situation.  Always love hearing from you.  

Reviewer: carnage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2020 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Same Old Story

Ahh, so there I was, minding my own business, logging in to update my own story... and then my heart lept with joy when I saw this story had been updated. I was just wondering how I was going to spend my Saturday night... and know I know! So happy to see you continue this story. What a hot, weird, emotional roller coaster it's been. I don't think a story has ever made me feel anger and sadness from the characters relationships as much as this one. Alright... Imma bout to dive in... wish me luck.



Author's Response:

All of the luck wished!

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