Reviewer: carnage Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2020 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 41 - Four Stories, One Mistake

Another nice addition to your story, man. I loved it. I've read it twice now and enjoyed it both times. 

The workout with Samara was awesome, I thought. I really liked how she saw the struggling micros in her underwear and then just dropped them to the floor. Her attitude came throught so well in your writing. And even her workout was super hot, with the tinies trying to get out of the way, crawling deeper.

Snorting humans like cocaine was a nice touch that I haven't seen in ages. Good stuff, man!

And of cource, Victoria's god complex was the cherry on top. I'll admit, I love feet crushing the most, but it was so awesome when she would use boiling hot tea or cause "natural" disasters and other things to torment them. It really added alot to this chapter.

All in all, I loved it and I can't wait for more. Good work!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  It was super fun writing these little mini backstory ideas.  Really lets me get some ideas out that I have held up in my head for a while and didnt really have a huge outlet to put them anywhere.  

Your support means a lot when you yourself are a great writer.  Thank you!