You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: carnage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2021 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 50 - Action

Another great chapter. The scenes with Lacy, Jessica, and Ana are just so incredibly well written and fun to read. And of course, the Biraal city POV sections are my favorite... your writing from their tiny persepctive is always top notch. Definitely sad to see this coming to an end!



Author's Response:

Thank you! It was really fun to write as well.  

Reviewer: Kamaeli Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2021 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 50 - Action

Fifty chapters!!! Incredible job overall, and this one's no exception. Loved Lacy's brief hesitation and final decision and how the three of them each brought something of their own ........to the table... XD XD.  Also I'm glad that they are close enough now to be able to poke fun at each other without getting all pissy. Never really thought I'd say this, but I think I might actually be a little sad once it's all over, now that it's almost there... haha.



Author's Response:

hahahah! I love puns.  It's something I wish I brought more of to the table....   I'm gonna be sad, too! 

You must login (register) to review.