[Report This]Date: December 01 2021 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 55 - The End Part 3
Finally had a chance to catch up and read this update. Nice work on this chapter! I just love your writing style so much.
The section dealing with Isabella was superb. The perspective of her footwear towering over the tiny population was such a great way to symbolize their place in the world. And the single drip of water falling from her body was a really good way to emphasize their helplessness too. Her careless attitude with squishing them too quickly, or accidently, just from not paying attention, was also super hot because of how good your writing is. And the way she demanded her red heels to be cleaned, and then just ending up crushing them, was everything I love in a giantess as far as casual cruelness goes.
But to be honest, that scene with Miranda just cumming on the little city was surprisingly hot. Nice work with that section. I had a feeling that when she told Natalie to pick a new mayor, that it wasn’t going to end well… ha, and just crushing the new mayor with her finger was super fun to read. And wow, poor Asif, lol.
Great job with this chapter and this whole story in general, actually. I’m looking forward to reading your last chapter. Bitter sweet though, this is one of the greats on this site.
Author's Response:
Thank you carnage, as always, your stories are great so I really value your opinion about my style.