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Reviewer: Kamaeli Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2020 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 44 - Absolute Power

Fantastic chapter! Lacy's creative cruelness is the best. I can only imagine the wrath that will surely be unleashed for Biraal's unspeakable act...



Author's Response:

Thank you, Lacy definetly wont waste them.

Reviewer: Questathana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2020 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 44 - Absolute Power

Another great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: fatal15 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2020 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning

I really hope this story goes on forever, I feel like there's a lot to work with. Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

There's definetely a time and a place to end a story, but I have a lot more planned for this for sure.  There's just too many things to tie up before I think about the actual end.  

Reviewer: Minivoid Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2020 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 43 - A Night on the Town

Wow it was kinda ominous how, for the first time, Miranda intentionally killed one of her own people. I really hope she isn't being corrupted by Jessica. Interesting chapter dude, well done.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment!  Yeah, that was a fun one to write.  I tried to think of the best way to justify Miranda doing what she did.  But we will see how well she handles it when she's sobered up.  stay tuned.  

Reviewer: Wwsl Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18 2020 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Four Stories, One Mistake

I voted for Samara in this game.Obviouslythe suffering of  tiny is too suffocating,I hope those little guys can hold on..xd



Author's Response:

I'm not so sure they made it out alive lmao

Reviewer: carnage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2020 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 41 - Four Stories, One Mistake

Another nice addition to your story, man. I loved it. I've read it twice now and enjoyed it both times. 

The workout with Samara was awesome, I thought. I really liked how she saw the struggling micros in her underwear and then just dropped them to the floor. Her attitude came throught so well in your writing. And even her workout was super hot, with the tinies trying to get out of the way, crawling deeper.

Snorting humans like cocaine was a nice touch that I haven't seen in ages. Good stuff, man!

And of cource, Victoria's god complex was the cherry on top. I'll admit, I love feet crushing the most, but it was so awesome when she would use boiling hot tea or cause "natural" disasters and other things to torment them. It really added alot to this chapter.

All in all, I loved it and I can't wait for more. Good work!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  It was super fun writing these little mini backstory ideas.  Really lets me get some ideas out that I have held up in my head for a while and didnt really have a huge outlet to put them anywhere.  

Your support means a lot when you yourself are a great writer.  Thank you! 

Reviewer: Kamaeli Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2020 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Four Stories, One Mistake

Loving the consistent updates, and great ones too! Nice to see what's been going on with those other ladies, even if they aren't the main characters.

 

I'm looking forward to seeing what will happen with Lacy, Ki and Jessica...



Author's Response:

That's defintely going to be an interesting curve to write for those characters.  We'll see what happens

Reviewer: Minivoid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2020 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Same Old Story

Been following this story for awhile and I got to say it's a personal favorite. The scenario and character writing has been top-notch and I'm excited to see how Jessica and Lacy's celebration plays out (giant drunk girls are the best!). Anyways, keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Minivoid.  I'm glad you have been following for so long, it's for sure been a long ride.  I agree, drunk giant girls are the best.  

Reviewer: carnage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2020 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Same Old Story

Well, you hit it out of the park again. Jessica is definetely my favorite character, and her business is really interesting and I can't wait to see where that goes. But the dialogue between Miranda and Lacy at the beginning was really well written. Loved that the fleeing micros died from Lacy's actions and Miranda didn't even seem to notice. Well done!



Author's Response:

Such kind words from someone who also has such a great piece of writing, makes me wonder sometimes how a Naomi would handle the situation.  Always love hearing from you.  

Reviewer: carnage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2020 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Same Old Story

Ahh, so there I was, minding my own business, logging in to update my own story... and then my heart lept with joy when I saw this story had been updated. I was just wondering how I was going to spend my Saturday night... and know I know! So happy to see you continue this story. What a hot, weird, emotional roller coaster it's been. I don't think a story has ever made me feel anger and sadness from the characters relationships as much as this one. Alright... Imma bout to dive in... wish me luck.



Author's Response:

All of the luck wished!

Reviewer: VendingMasheen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2020 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning

So glad to see you're back! I'm always happy to see you post again! Great chapter btw ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: TheChoreographer Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27 2020 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning

This is fascinating. I'm impressed by the scale of it; the various characters, the shifting perspectives. Multiple parts stand out to me - this is really good. Excited to see where it goes.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm curious as to what parts stand out for you.

Reviewer: Questathana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2020 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Interlude V

I love this especially the last part, but it probably had to do with my gum fetish.



Author's Response:

I didn't even consider there might be someone with a gum fetish reading haha, but now I'm super happy I included it in there.  Hope you enjoyed!

Reviewer: Wwsl Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21 2020 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Interlude V

Sandra is so strict with the *employees*. It's wonderful,But it also makes Isabella seem to be kind to the *product*test, hoping that the subsequent depiction of Isabella will be more cruel, such as the scene when she just appeared.

Author's Response:

They are definitely cruel, just in different ways.  I know Isabella is more of a classic type of evil giantess where as Faust is more like a experimental.  Something I've always wanted to write.  Thank you for leaving reviews!

Reviewer: VendingMasheen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2020 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Isabella's Return Part 2

Awesome chapter. As always, great detail on both the tinies and giantess pov. Also, it would be great to see a chapter that has scenes taking place inside isabella's stomach, if you know what I mean ;) or any of the others girls ;D Hope you're doing well, btw. Writing can be a mission 



Author's Response:

It certainly is a mission.  Inside the stomach is definitely something I want to include in the near future.  I'm still trying to figure out how to go about that lol

Reviewer: VendingMasheen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2020 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning

Great to know you're making chapters again. Love this story!

Reviewer: Kamaeli Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2020 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Isabella's Return Part 2

Top notch as always!! This story is the main reason I check back here so frequently. Looking forward to future action and scenarios like this



Author's Response: Hell yeah! Thank you, Kamaeli. There’s gonna be plenty more chapters to come back and check on soon.

Reviewer: officerkc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2020 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Isabella's Return Part 2

I now love Isabella! This story it's fantastic and i can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Always appreciate hearing from you, officerkc!

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2019 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning

Ok what is the tech level of the micros?  If they have advanced education or an industrail base they should be able to deal with Jessica and Isabella.  Hell world war two tech would be sufficent.  Nerve agents would be ideal in how they would end those two B(s) are no more difficult to produce then other industrial chemicals (other then some safety, but when millions are dying, well corners can be cut) and could be produced even by nanos in sufficent quanity to easily kill their oppressiers.

Hoping those two get the twitching justice they deserve!

fairly decent story!  Thank you.



Author's Response:

I get that.  But im just writing to entertain and carry on the story and everyone's favorite characters.   Realism kind of goes out the door when it comes to miles tall women.  

It wouldnt be a super fun story if the first interaction is a tiny city using toxic gas on a giant woman.  Admittingly to me it would be pretty funny, but I cant write that hahaha 

Reviewer: Wwsl Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2019 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 37 - Isabella's Return Part 1

All in all, I like it.I just hope Jessica's business doesn't exhaustion of the city.hah



Author's Response: Don’t worry. There’s still a lot of story left.

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