Date: February 10 2017 10:45 AM Title: Mallow's trial
Hey Franchise, glad to see you writing again. Hope your doing well! :D Lana is so cute! I like how you use blunette to describe Lana as well as verdette to describe Mallow in CH 1. That is a very unique play on words you did there. Hope you continue this and also I meant to give you five stars in my last review. If you got less its my tablets fault.
Author's Response:
It's alright Nothingness, i figured you were trying to rate my story as 10 :P
Thank you for taking your time to review, i appreciate it a lot, :)
Generally when i describe people in my stories i use hair colors as signalers for whom i'm speaking of and finding creative ways to do it is something i've a;ways enjoyed. ^.^
[Report This]Date: December 31 2016 10:51 PM Title: Mallow's trial
Haven't played Pokémon much recently, but great story! Sad that the strawberry armpit scene didn't get to happen like feet scene haha looking forward to more chapters.
Author's Response:
I had planend it in, but i was dragging the feet a bit to long so i ended up cutting it. But don't worry, i'm saving it for someone else. ;)
[Report This]Date: December 28 2016 5:10 PM Title: Mallow's trial
This was excellent! Great to see another one of your stories! When playing through S&M I thought the Akala trial captains would be excellent giantesses, especially Mallow and Lana. I'd love some anal insertion with either of them. Lillie would also make for a great gts. Someone before suggested butt stuff with her and I think that'd be great. She should definitely be the most gentle but that doesn't make it any less sexy. Thanks again for taking the time to write such a nice story!
Author's Response: I will most certainly be using some Anal insertion, don't you worry! Thank you for reviewing, the reponces ive gotten so far far exceeded what I imagined. I'll try to have a new installment soon.
[Report This]Date: December 28 2016 9:48 AM Title: Mallow's trial
You portrayed Mallow's mischievousness perfectly and your writing is top-notch although I already knew this just from your editing skills with Sterben's work ;)
Date: December 27 2016 8:52 AM Title: Mallow's trial
Oh no you didn't! I'm...I'm speechless. A Pokemon S&M gts story involving the island trials. I'm also glad to see that your writing again, Franchise and that I could see your latest story in action.(I didn't read this yet but I sure as hell will.)
Author's Response:
Aww thank you Nothingness :D
I've been away far to long in my opinion, so i thought about writing the first thing that came to mind when i had a moment. This was at the top of my list. ^,^
Date: December 26 2016 11:56 AM Title: Mallow's trial
Only the first 2 episodes of S&M anime are out in English, but you can watch the first 9 episodes in Japanese with subtitles on YouTube right now.
Date: December 26 2016 2:25 AM Title: Mallow's trial
Ooh, a franchise I recognize! This ought to be even more fun than usual, because I won't have to do much Googling to figure out what everyone looks like lol.
Yeah, I enjoyed "The Fairies of Fairy Tail", and now I'm adding a review to something you've made. I really want to see how this goes on!
In terms of suggestions . . . vaginal insertion and footplay are favorites of mine, so maybe two girls challenge Olivia together and their Z-Rings go berserk and shrink them to 3 inches or so? Not picky on which girl, but I went for the first one I could think of that nobody mentioned yet lol
Author's Response:
Hmm, no one has asked for her yet, i think i could arrange something to do with a double battle. It's good to see your review Silent-One, i'll try to please with the next instalment. ^.^
Date: December 25 2016 9:10 PM Title: Mallow's trial
Have you ever considered doing stuff with the anime? Ash could shrink down in front of all 3 Lana, Lillie, and Mallow, and get passed between them. It would be more gentle given the nature of their established characters in the anime since they're all friends, but no less sexy.
Author's Response:
I haven't actually seen the Anime yet so no i hadn't considered it. I'll have to check it out, you raise a valid point. It could be an intresting interaction between the four of them. Thank you for pointing that out to me Foreignkanto. :)
[Report This]Date: December 25 2016 3:59 PM Title: Mallow's trial
Nice! I would really like to see Lusamine shrink down Gladion, Hau and Sun(main playable character) and toy with them in different ways, like she eats one, crushes another and keeps the last one as her pet/toy
Author's Response:
Hmm, i think i can try something like that. I haven't received any requests for her yet :)