[Report This]Date: September 06 2020 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
An awesome experience through the three parts of this story, your improvement writing was greatly noticeable from the first part to now. A excellent feeling of tenderness everytime and in this last part the relationships went a lot more realistic I think. Loved it until the end!
[Report This]Date: February 28 2017 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 10
To paraphrase the singing group Tavares:
"Evan (doot-doo! doot-doo!)
Must be missing a goddess.
(Doot-doo! Doot-doo!)
Missing one goddess, baby, 'cause
She's there, with him, right now."
[Report This]Date: February 21 2017 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
I know this is going to sound misogynistic. But, I speak as an older brother with still all-too-clear memories of it. Asking girls Katie's age to be carefully selective, in how they share a secret, is like asking them not to giggle.
Ain't gonna happen!
Author's Response:
You're right, I don't think Katie is gonna be taking Alex to school any time soon, as much as she'd love to. and don't worry, I didn't think you're being misogynistic ;)
Date: February 15 2017 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 8
Nice to see Evan behaving like a decent person. Not how I was expecting him to react to what Sarah did. I'm surprised that he actually seems to enjoy being dominated by a giantess (apparently, he's surprised too). Sarah getting a taste of power seems like it could lead to disaster later on but for now, things seem to be on track. Curious if that will remain the case.
Author's Response:
I figured the story would get pretty boring after a while if Evan just keeps on complaining about his predicament and being nasty to Sarah, so I decided that's gotta change.
[Report This]Date: February 15 2017 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
"Life was about more than sexual relationships, after all."
The most sensible piece of understatement I have ever heard! Unfortunately, most real-world guys would probably go: "Pfft! Yeah, right."
Author's Response:
Yeah, that's pretty much how Evan feels too. But with a change in size comes a change in priorities, eventually.
[Report This]Date: February 15 2017 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
Sounds like there's trouble brewing in this duplex paradise.
[Report This]Date: February 15 2017 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 8
All your stories are enjoyable to read.
Interesting interaction in this one. It will be to see how this will work out with Evan and Sarah. I wonder how all this will develop.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, I'll try to post the next chapter faster than the last one.
Date: January 30 2017 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
Evan's such a jerk. He definitely had that coming. I have to imagine that this will change the dynamic of their relationship though. He might apologize but will it be sincere or out of fear and resentment? And now that Sarah's gotten a taste of power, will she let that go to her head? Interesting chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah, Sarah needs to stop being such a pushover as far as her boyfriend is concerned, even though she ultimately still wants him. And Evan will difinitely have to learn to be a lot nicer and care about others besides himself.
[Report This]Date: January 21 2017 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 6
I take it Sarah doesn't knock any more than Evan used to respect boundaries.
Date: January 20 2017 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
That was pretty hot. I love the idea that he's allowed to just wander around on her body while she lies in bed doing other things. Now I wonder if Sarah wil notice and get...ideas.
[Report This]Date: January 16 2017 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 5
To paraphrase Richard Pryor in STIR CRAZY (re: Evan's attitude): "The dude ain't ever gonna learn."
Author's Response:
Just give him a little time, he'll come round.
[Report This]Date: January 16 2017 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 4
I guess that answers that: Evan loves only himself.
[Report This]Date: January 16 2017 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 3
I wonder if Evan loves Sarah as unconditionally as she loves him?
Date: January 15 2017 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 5
Evan still seems to be a bit of a jerk. It's interesting to see how such a macho guy reacts to his sudden loss of power.
Date: January 06 2017 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 4
I have a feeling the same being or beings responsible for Alex's shrinking are involved in Evan's. Perhaps they did it as a sort of punishment, so that Evan would change his ways and learn to be a better person.
Author's Response:
It's an interesting idea, but I'd actually planned to just make it a side-effect of Alex touching him.
Date: January 05 2017 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good Story, but I found Emily a bit stupid (and Alex too) to think and nearly blame for the fate of Jerk Evan. And Alex apolosized ! For what?
Author's Response:
Alex didn't want there to be any bad feelings between him and Evan, since he doesn't know how long Evan will be staying with them while shrunk. He's also not very self-confident and often feels that he's the one who's to blame whenever something goes wrong. Emily doesn't really care what Evan thinks, but she does care about Sarah and wants to remain friends with her, that's why she's not being too hard on Evan (for now).
Date: December 31 2016 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
Sarah's only know Evan for a month? Well, now she may be stuck with him whether that's what she wanted or not. Or if she doesn't want that, Emily may have to take care of two tiny guys. Lots of potential consequences here.
This chapter made me think of couples who face unexpected complications - a surprise pregnancy or a person getting seriously ill, for example. Do they do the right thing, stay with the other person to help and support them? Do they get the heck out of there because they can't handle the responsibility? I'm very curious to see how Sarah reacts to this situation.
Author's Response:
I think Sarah's torn between the two options you mentioned, but she did think the world of Evan before his accident, so she should at least try and stay with him for now.
Date: December 31 2016 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 2
Neat to see a continuation of this after so long. The spreading of the spell is an interesting way to reintroduce some tension. Good stuff as always; I admittedly probably need to reread the earlier stories because it's been such a while.
Speaking of romance stories though I'm still holding out for a third fairy tale, man. My review whines will follow you to your grave.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, but I'm afraid it'll be a while before I get around to your request. But if you've got any good ideas for a third Fairy Tale story, please share! I can always use a bit of inspiration...
Date: December 29 2016 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
Huh. That wasn't what I was expecting. Does Alex have some sort of virus that can be transmitted to other men? I don't remember the earlier stories that well but was he never around other guys at all before this?
Author's Response:
He'd never been in physical contact with another guy since shrinking. But yes, that is what happens if he does. Not really a virus, since it is a magic spell that shrunk him in the first place, with some unexpected side-effects.
Date: December 29 2016 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
great to have you back, interesting spin on this series.
"Girl from another star" really needs a sequel; maybe modelled after "invasion" but a whole lot les violence
Author's Response:
Well, "Girl From Another Star" is itself not finished yet, and I don't know if it ever will be, so we'll see ;) But I'll consider it. Thanks for the review.