Giantess World
Reviews For David Shrunk
Reviewer: psychotropic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2016 4:11 AM Title: The Happening
Date: December 30 2016 4:11 AM Title: The Happening
Excellent story! Keep it up!
Reviewer: Fertility goddess loli lilith Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2016 3:12 PM Title: The Happening
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I went back and added a couple minor details to provide more of a description as you suggested.
Date: December 28 2016 3:12 PM Title: The Happening
What is Olivia wearing around her leg area, and what color are the flats? Shouldn't that be noticed before the nail color? Also here did his clothes go? I liked how quickly you got to the shrinking but it needs more details.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I went back and added a couple minor details to provide more of a description as you suggested.