Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2023 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 22: Doing Her a Favor

Re-Reading this story (and series) for the....I can't recall how many times. And I feel I need to leave a comment specifically here. 

And I have to say I do hope you come back to it/finish this saga one day in the future.

It's just so freaking good.

I love the gradual but powerful development of the characters and the situation Scott is in just keeps devolving for him. 

I have to say, loving the scenarios where he's with the middle aged women (especially their wine addled adventures XD)
 
But Sylvia has me intrigued, another older woman. But one who's use of Scott isn't as bad, or the very least, she's not actively making it as bad as some of the others. 

She's one of the few ' lighter'  characters in terms of their treatment of Scott.

But this chapter I keep coming back to as it has me hooked, what is Syliva's plans, what can she do to Judy, what can Scott do if he decides to spill the beans.

I know Judy seems to be on a power trip and is dreaming high.

But could Sylvia be a way out for him...a way out from the torment, of the seemingly never ending (kinky XD) but forced subjegation at the hands of Nancy, or his mother's seemingly aloof nature. (and her own subjegation of him, albeit less erotic in intent)

Sylvia has me intrigued, and I love it. And I enjoy reading her character and her interaction with Scott. 

Your writing is always a treat, and a gift, your description, your characters, your erotically charged segments, intercut with the worldbuilding, all make for a wonderful read.

And I do hope you come back to this series in future. I feel it needs a nice cap off. (and Justice for Scott XD I may not get it, but I can dream)....and for some reason, I keep picturing Judy and Nancy under Sylvia's feet. 

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2017 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 22: Doing Her a Favor

Getting some mixed messages from what she's saying and offering and the fact that she does seem to like playing with him, especially when he's naked.

Author's Response: Mixed messages are basically the summation of the guy's life now