Date: June 08 2017 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 23: Boys Will Be Boys
It's brave of Kyle to stand up to Judy, but there's going to be complications, since she owns the house he lives in.
Author's Response:
You're definitely right about that. In this case, Kyle is going more on principle than future planning.
[Report This]Date: June 08 2017 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 23: Boys Will Be Boys
Got around to reading this.
Still think Judy is the greatest milf of all time.
The first impression I had of the shrink club was like some sort of pseudo alcoholics anonymous. I still some what feel that way and it make me smile. Was also great to see a few tiny daughters there and even I think one giant dad(who didn't speak thank god lol).
Maggie's character has matured perfectly but I'm most surprised about Kyle's character arc. He went from this apathetic kid to actually being Scott's greatest ally in the house. Which seems to have been his downfall. I cannot wait to see what Judy does with two tiny kids. Hope they are both down to her favorite height.
Took a bit but you've given I little more info on Scott's dad. That would seriously be the ultimate scenario for me because Judy could finally shove a tiny inside her(hopefully bushy) vagina.
Anyways, fantastic story and series. I'm really looking forward to what the future holds for the Stevens household.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks. AA was definitely a small inspiration for the style of the shrink therapy meetings. Kyle's journey has been slow the last couple of stories, but things are finally coming to a head. We'll see Judy's reaction in the next chapter. Scott's dad will be making an appearance later on in the story, and not just as a quick "here he is, now the story's over" role.
Date: June 08 2017 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 23: Boys Will Be Boys
Wow... I expected Scott to get out of it by admitting that they were talking about their father,
instead for the first time since the big bang I'm happy to see Kyle in a chapter!
Now you really have me wondering what she's going to do next
- if it becomes known she shrunk him for what he did, and how she found out, that will be *bad* PR
- otoh, she might find a way to use it to her advantage, showing she understands Kyle's concern for his brother,
and maybe finding a way to use this and who-knows-what-else to keep him shrunken some more
or make a good story for the public ("Kyle is guilty of being kind-hearted, but Scott,
he needs more time to rehab...")
Author's Response:
Admitting they were talking about their father might not be a great move, either, as Judy tends to dodge that subject. We'll begin to unravel Judy's machinations for this scenario in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: June 07 2017 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 23: Boys Will Be Boys
I love that Kyle stood up to his mother. Though i also look forward to Judy punishing someone besides just Scott. Previous stories had mentioned that she also punished Kyle and Maggie, but we haven't seen it.
I also wonder if this outburst will spare Scott, since Judy will probably be angrier with Kyle right now.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! The coming chapters, and really this story overall by the end, is going to examine closer how Judy treats and hands out consequences differently to her kids.
And it's probably wishful thinking to hope Scott will be spared. ;)
Date: June 07 2017 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 23: Boys Will Be Boys
I hope that she doesn't shrink Kyle as well. That only leaves one sibling left to save the day. Or she can give one of them to Maggie and keep one to herself? Great story. I wonder if Scott is regrettng not going with that one girl at Soccer Camp when he could have escaped this mess. :)
Author's Response:
There may well be a bit of shared one-on-one time in the upcoming chapters. And that story about the soccer camp is meant to act as a weird sort of ghost in Scott's past, to imagine how the trajectory of his life might've been different.
Date: June 07 2017 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 23: Boys Will Be Boys
Man I hate Judy. She is so evil. All he wanted to do was talk to his girlfriend. She is a real bitch lol. I love your stories. I hope Judy get's something coming to her.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much. I won't say how, but Judy may not necessarily do what she's about to do to the boys without a few long-term consequences among other characters.
[Report This]Date: June 07 2017 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 23: Boys Will Be Boys
The son finally stands up to the mother, interesting...
Author's Response:
At long last