[Report This]Date: November 17 2017 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 29: Training Under Maggie
Awesome writing! All the chapters at the R&R center have been incredible. I love seeing how Judy's master plan is incorporated into the universe you are constructing. Top notch
Author's Response:
Glad to hear. I'm trying more and more to integrate these stories with the background world stuff, wherever logical
[Report This]Date: July 20 2017 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 29: Training Under Maggie
Another great chapter.
So Maggie has a never been shrunken? I thought a previous story had implied that she had, just not as often as Scott or even Kyle.
I also can't tell if Maggie is being harder on Kyle here or not. Though part of it is because Kyle keeps talking back, something Scott doesn't do or at least hasn't done in awhile.
Author's Response: There may have been hints that she almost was, but as far as this story is concerned, Maggie's never shrunk. So just cough if you happen across any plot holes. We'll see more later, but Maggie's still not quite sure how to feel about Kyle in his new position. Either way, she's much more conflicted than she is with Scott, who she's had plenty of years to adjust her attitude toward.
[Report This]Date: July 20 2017 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 29: Training Under Maggie
Poor Kyle, he got mixed up in the wrong brats world.
Author's Response: He did indeed
[Report This]Date: July 20 2017 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 29: Training Under Maggie
"Life lessons"...right. This is all happening because why again? A phone call or a skype or something?..."Life lessons" I think it'll be fun and fair to literally start hating almost every woman in this story......5 stars!
Author's Response: Hehe. Part of the fun for me in writing this series is making characters it's easy to hate but also difficult to want them gone. Ideally, Scott is easy to feel for.