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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2017 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 11

Welcome back!!!

Reviewer: geeman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2017 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 11

Love this story, it's my favorite of the still regularly updated stories on this site and so hope you update again soon! Now onto my chapter overview. Basically, this guy has the worst luck,  probably because the story itself needs him to go from scenario to scenario but what are the odds the mom walks in JUST as he makes his escape and happens to see him in near pitch darkness? And it again, what are the odds he gets recaptured on the first day of his escape from Vanessa when he's under a pound of snow? Story convenience I guess. Also I'm noticing small tidbits in this and other chapters that people not immune to the shrink disease are actually kind of rare. The majority IS immune right? Or am I misinterpreting things? Anyway, I liked the chapter and hope you update again soon!

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