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Reviewer: methodman Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 10 2017 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 12

Great chapter!  Sydney is shaping up to be a great mistress and the private school makes for a great setting.  Its also great to see how to parents and teachers interact with the student's shrunken pets.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2017 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 12

Love this story! I like how he keeps going from the frying pan and into the fire. he was much better off with Vanessa, I dont think Sydney cares much about his well being, he’s just a trinket and now apparently Ms Holloway is bad enough to make people tremble in fear. 

 

On a side note, this is the second time I have seen a dickhead review in two separate stories. All the themes in this genre has been explored to death. This story is well written with good characters and not dull as shit, you know, actually has action in it. 

 

Reviewer: geeman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2017 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 12

As messed up as this situation is, this might be a good chance for Dave to escape, hes proven himself resourceful before!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2017 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 12

Ok the teacher confiscating tinies is hotter than I ever expecting it to be. Still curious to see Judy at Hannah's barefeet but you craft an amazing story. Also nice homage/callback to Jacksmith's "Toy Teacher" with Hannah's pets name.

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