Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07 2013 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

This looks as if it's a nice story. I feel like theirs a lot of emotion in this chapter and the description is much better than in a lot of stories. I'm surprised that nobody has left a review yet, however to be fair, you haven't tagged your story properly, adding only one tag for the age of the characters, which since Andy is described as being twenty, need to be updated with the "young adult" category because given the new giantessworld categories, teenager is listed as being from ages thirteen through to nineteen. Assuming parents and teachers play a role in the story too, other ages tags should be added as appropriate.