[Report This]Date: March 20 2017 2:40 PM Title: Truth or Denial
I'm still enjoying this story. The introduction of Marcelle has made things interesting. I didn't think Ivory or Ingrid would do the kind of things you expect to see in these stories. Marcelle seems more likely. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Marcelle definitely lacks the reservatons that the others possess and is going to put things in motion.
[Report This]Date: March 19 2017 7:53 PM Title: Truth or Denial
I just read all 5 chapters. I love the characters especially Marcelle. Only problem is that she is Tanner's cousin. After reading the 5th chapter, I looked back at the 4th chapter hoping it was a typo or maybe she was Ingrid's cousin, but Marcelle is Tanner's cousin.
You don't have to change anything since I think I'm the only one who feels different about this, but still Marcelle is fantastic.
Ivory is another great character. I also love what Marcelle said, a about cougars. Perhaps there could be another mom, or neighbor's mom that shows up and has that same agreessive/sexy behaviour that Marcelle has.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Yikes in hindsight I can see where that could be unclear. Marcelle is also from Ivory's side of the family. Ivory's niece, Ingrid's cousin. I'm assuming it was the bit in chapter 4 afte Ivory got off the phone and told Tanner " It's your cousin Marcelle." (or something to that effect) that made you think otherwise. I may go and change the wording if there's similar confusion. I guess I should've researched it beforehand, but I didn't think saying someting like "step-cousin" was a thing.
Thanks for the review though. Marcelle will definitely be a pot-stirrer in the early goings.