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Reviewer: NRawkGTS Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 23 2017 7:42 AM Title: Trapped

I believe Marcelle is being gentle on Tanner, if not for his sake then for her own, but I was really hoped she'd accidentally hurt him in some obvious way.  I'd be great to see that calm, manipulating attitude falter as she becomes panicked or something.  Still, I doubt that's the last of his cousin's backdoor Tanner has seen.



Author's Response:

There's truth to that, even if in theory Marcelle could do whatever she wanted to Tanner it's not like she wouldn't have to face Ingrid or Ivory's wrath if she went too far. She's been pretty good at covering her tracks so far.

Reviewer: daftpunk Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23 2017 2:21 AM Title: Trapped

I have enjoyed reading your story in progress very much so far. I was wondering if you were planning any unaware type chapters and if you enjoy writing that sort of way.

Back when Marcelle introduced tanner to the giantess fetish she asked if he was attracted to ivory and then tanner discovered those images of unaware crush/vore. Maybe tanner could be mistaken for an object in a shower/bathoom scene? His thoughts on ingrid as a giantess have been awoken but hes yet to see his step mom in that light.

For some reason the unaware genre is always better when the giantess really cares about the protagonist, which makes the interaction that much better. 

Great job!



Author's Response:

I've entertained a thought or two about an unaware scenario that could occcur, I can't say too much for certain. I have a general idea of where I want the story to end up and key facets to the characters, but beyond that I write with a broad outline of what I want to accomplish in a chapter regarding signature scenes, what will be set in motion, character development, etc. After that, I work out the inbetweens. 

Personally I never cared a lot for the unaware genre as a whole. Or better stated, not stories that revolve around that genre. But in what I do have planned I do think there is a possibility where an unaware chapter will work. It's one of those things I'll decide when I get there.

 I appreciate the review, it gives me some ideas to juggle for future events in the story. Stay tuned!

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