Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2017 10:33 PM Title: Night and Day

Wow, the power of the ring caused the Doom of Valyria? That explains why no one used it before now. Nice plot twist.

If Elia can control her size, I hope she will spend some time at a less extreme scale. Several miles tall seems a bit over the top and makes interaction limited. At least for my tastes. But don't mind me, you should write what appeals to you. The story continues to be intriguing either way.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, glad you liked my explanation about the ring. x