[Report This]Date: March 26 2017 7:13 PM Title: CHAPTER IX – Digestion Begins in the Mouth
really great story
Date: March 25 2017 3:13 AM Title: CHAPTER IX – Digestion Begins in the Mouth
Very cool. Great idea with the endoscope. Brilliant.
[Report This]Date: March 24 2017 5:44 PM Title: CHAPTER IX – Digestion Begins in the Mouth
You're a sick man, Mac. ;)
Good stuff.
[Report This]Date: March 17 2017 11:21 PM Title: CHAPTER VIII – Learning Fast
Elsa is secretly Glados, spoiler alert.
Date: March 17 2017 10:02 PM Title: CHAPTER VIII – Learning Fast
The story grows. You have 3 different areas going on at the same time. Really like the tiny town. What will happen with the mother? Greatly looking forward to see what the towering mother does.
Date: March 17 2017 11:30 AM Title: CHAPTER I – A New Opportunity
This is a awesome story. I hope Elsa doesn't betray Annie later on in the story. I was also wondering, how come you didn't use the FF/f and FF/m size role tags?
Author's Response:
Tanks! I don't have plans for that happening, so don't worry.
Date: March 16 2017 2:55 AM Title: CHAPTER VII – The ‘Stinky One’
Great chapter. Love the fear of when Elsa's hand enters the aquarium. It's cool that she gives them commands. I like when she puts them in Annie's hand. One Giantess to another.
The Tupperware is cool but not a lot of air in there.
Fun experiment. They should be very obedient after this. The others will also become more obedient.
Looking forward to the next chapter to see if our escape makes it to the Mother.
Very enjoyable,
Diesel
[Report This]Date: March 15 2017 6:50 PM Title: CHAPTER VII – The ‘Stinky One’
FOR SCIENCE!!!
Date: March 11 2017 9:11 PM Title: CHAPTER VI – Running With Scissors
Cool chapter. Don't anger a Giantess Goddess.
[Report This]Date: March 11 2017 8:56 PM Title: CHAPTER VI – Running With Scissors
Good stuff.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: March 10 2017 8:59 PM Title: CHAPTER V – Prison Break
Cool, an escape. If only he can get to the Mother. Great story. Very interesting.
[Report This]Date: March 10 2017 5:53 PM Title: CHAPTER I – A New Opportunity
Totally overlooked this. Great stuff, fascinating characters and development. I love Annie's ditsy character.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot. I'm having a lot of fun writing this, and trying to be more detalied, without rushing too quicly to the good stuff.
Date: March 09 2017 12:56 AM Title: CHAPTER I – A New Opportunity
I read your other story, which was good. This one is even better. More detailed, scarier.
Date: March 08 2017 8:25 PM Title: CHAPTER IV – The Fall
Fantastic chapter. Love that they run and cower when her hand enters. Love that she crushed her. Will the mother find the aquarium?
Date: March 06 2017 12:55 PM Title: CHAPTER I – A New Opportunity
Please consider adding the mother squashing the 5 guys in addition to what your doing? I think it would be great. The feeling of oh we're saved to ewww bugs, squash is a great feeling.
Date: March 06 2017 12:51 PM Title: CHAPTER III – Collecting The ‘Participants’
Cool chapter. I like that you gave the littles time to peruse their surroundings. Imagine seeing those gigantic faces. Feeling the tremors from their footsteps. Excellent.
Date: March 05 2017 1:59 AM Title: CHAPTER II – Accomplishing Great Things
Have you thought that if the guys survived maybe the mother comes downstairs and they think they are saved. She sees some of them on the ground and thinks they are bugs and steps on them. It would be a great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it. This is a sequel to "Professor, We Shrunk Ourselves". The five guys did not survive, since they all died in the last story. But I am planning in doing something Unaware involving Elsa's mother in this story. ;)
Date: March 05 2017 12:30 AM Title: CHAPTER II – Accomplishing Great Things
Fascinating. Great chapter. Look out world.
Date: March 05 2017 12:24 AM Title: CHAPTER I – A New Opportunity
Great set up. Where are the boys?Will she figure it out? Hope so.