Reviews For Crushed Friendship
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Reviewer: TheodenTEdnew Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2023 9:57 AM Title: Part One: Size and Humanity

Here might be a point you may have not considered about shrinking. If someone was shrinking not by a device or spells but nature then how would the person get back to normal.

But if that person was your dearest friend, someone you wouldn't hurt ever and this exact situation happened how could you want to think or consider hurting that person, consider the person as a lowly creature when the person couldn't stop this from happening. That the fate they got was to die by their best friend.

They tried their hardest to get attention from someone who could of saved them. But in the end no one could save him not even the dearest of friends, cause that's what friends are for. To help you in the dire of times.

Reviewer: Megagiant5280 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06 2017 6:44 PM Title: Part One: Size and Humanity

I love the psychology of this story so far. Here is a woman that doesn't look at the shrinkee as a human and gets off on stomping the life out of them. Here is her best friend, a man she loves as a friend, who is now about to become a shrinkee. Does the friendship mean more than her primal urges or once he shrinks, he might as well be dead to her. Very interesting. Can't wait to see more.

Reviewer: SilentStep Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2017 12:26 PM Title: Part One: Size and Humanity

Keep going. This is great! Very exciting plot you've situated. Please continue!

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2017 10:04 AM Title: Part One: Size and Humanity

I like the premise of a ruined friendship where one party ends up humiliated and disposed of. Before he ends up a red, puny stain underfoot, I'd love to see him suffer some serious forced foot smelling.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2017 12:33 AM Title: Part One: Size and Humanity

Great introduction. Hope it goes where I think it goes.

Reviewer: blackairow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2017 3:05 PM Title: Part One: Size and Humanity

Really good start, I'm looking forward to reading more of this 

Reviewer: mattgrecs Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2017 2:23 PM Title: Part One: Size and Humanity

For english not being you're primary language i would of never known. Its very good and i love the premise can't wait to read more. 

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