Date: October 30 2020 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 24: Company
WAIT A MINUTE HOW OLD ARE YOU I GOTTA KNOW HOW MUCH OF A FUCKING FAILURE I AM
PLS PLS PLS PLS
Author's Response:
u arent a failure!!!!! nobody who has such refined taste as to read all is lost is a failure, especially my favorite reviewer
that being said I am the inglorious age of 18 at the time of writing
Date: October 30 2020 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 24: Company
If teagan doesn't give up on whitebreeze keep on account of being a tomkin lover (literally threw away an entire bastion of humanity for one fucking tomkin, fucking traitor) (even though I do love sihil) and she does end up reaching it now I'm starting to hope she becomes an hero, just because imagine sugdau but like times 200. All for a fucking tomkin. I know I already said so but I really think Sihil's gonna be even more disgusted because now teagan's killings are EVEN MORE indiscriminate than before. like sometimes you can say "well at least he'd never kill a kid" and they have that redeeming quality. But now teagan has nothing to redeem her. (a homocidal maniac and an omnicidal maniac are on two completely different levels of insane) (ok so like right now the best thing I can think of is in undertale when undyne says "you're not just going to kill monsters but even humans too" and that gives her just a double dose of disgust and righteous anger) So now instead of gray/grey/white/off-white (that's sihil, can't blame her for anything precious bean omochikaeri) it's more like gray/dark gray moving towards black/off white.
.... I just figured it out. Oh my god I just got it. Sihil knows how important she is to teagan, even more so if the ability triggered now and she just didn't mention it ("if you could understand me" is really tempting fate there teagan). Sihil, who's already lost everything is going to figure out that her own death would probably drive teagan to suicide so in a last attempt to stop her she's gonna do what she couldn't do when firkon's army tried to kill teagan with the siege engine. Sihil's gonna kill herself to drive teagan mad with grief enough that she takes her own life, stopping her insane killing spree for good.
.... it's 1 AM
Author's Response:
That's... actually a really fucking good guess and it makes me sad that I am forced to neither confirm nor deny it. In any case yeah Teagan is definitely headed towards a good old fashioned any% genocide run and Sihil is probably the only one with enough influence to change that atm
Of course, I'd personally find it hard to betray the only person on my side even if they are an omnicidal spellcasting giant, but then again, there's a reason why Sihil isnt a selfish shit
As always thanks for the review(s) they are giving me the will to go on every time I hit a mental roadblock
Date: October 30 2020 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 24: Company
>Hates tomkins
>longs for humanity
>acknowledges hassan and aaliyah hate her
>fucking murders 8 innocent humans for the sake of tomkins
Damn teagan should have just said they were your sex toys the Sudgauians probably would have just let you go
goddamn couldn't let any reader get too cozy with teagan i guess
tbh despite tomkins dislike/hatred/fear of humans I'm not gonna be surprised if next chapter they appear, hassan, aaliyah, and even sihil will be completely disgusted by the fact teagan has moved on from not only killing tomkins but humans too.
... I was expecting Sihil to just randomly blurt something out in english this chapter.
Poor Hannah, fucking bitch teagan should have just killed her. don't kill her whole family then leave her to deal with it. what a cunt.
Author's Response:
while it's true that Sihil and pals saw Teagan take out a sizable group of humans, I'm also pretty sure they understood that it was to protect them. Sigil might not like to see Teagan killing more, but I cant say Hassan or Aaliyah would feel the same way about the scenario
Date: October 30 2020 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 24: Company
..... how long has it been since you've last slept
do you have hypoxia
are you on drugs
Author's Response:
So basically when I was writing this I fell asleep in the middle of it, I finished it the next night with a comparatively clear mind! The only drug I'm on is anxiety, it's a 24/7 hour prescription
Date: October 29 2020 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 24: Company
OMG enzo!!! u r, like, my FAVES author on this website!!! i bet ur so smart and handsum and good at writing and i love u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (ps i really like the part where taegan is NAKEYD LOL!)
Author's Response:
thx adoring fan. i find your praise flattering and your critique very valid. i will keep this in mind as i write future chapters