Date: February 21 2021 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 30: Misgiving
I have a suggestion. You say stomachs are dark, which is true, but this is a world where magic exists (albeit rare in tomkins). Just have Teagan swallow at least one low level mage who can manifest a light orb spell (have the mage+civs swallowed together for extra chaos). Or maybe on a particularly cruel streak Teagan finds she can manifest her power internally (you've already suggested this as she's almost crushed her own heart with her magic before) and have it create a glimmering light inside her stomach or something.
See? I got you.
Date: February 19 2021 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 30: Misgiving
I desire an entire chapter dedicated to enslaved tomkins
none of that "ok she opens the cage and lets them go" shit either
I'm talking long, lengthy conversations
and also Teagan better not kill any of the fucking enslavers, considering what the tomkins did to that one woman. Just have her cram as many as she can down her pants like a dude trying to shoplift a whole ass tv from walmart or something
Author's Response:
desire and you shall receive, powerplay is my thing anyways so i was gonna do at minimum a half chapter on it. to be fair though the enslavers are also highwaymen and have done their fair share of murdering humans and tomkins alike, and to top it all off the landsknekte are offering Teagan quite the haul if she caves a few skulls in. sorta hard to say no to that