[Report This]Date: July 18 2017 7:28 PM Title: A new friend
How is she going to punish him? By putting him in an unwashed sock? From what I've read so far, that's about as meaningless to a foot-fetishist like John as grounding an agoraphobe!
Author's Response: Let's just say, it won't be the conventional punishment and the girl(s) who dish out the punishment won't be Gaby. I still have to plan out the later chapters as well so it is still unplanned what they are going to do to John. And thank you for reading and leaving a review, I appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: July 17 2017 10:50 PM Title: The Lunch Break
Can't wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: July 14 2017 1:21 AM Title: Prologue
The nose chapter was really good. i'd love to see you do more unusual body parts, and would be particularly interested in some unaware entrapment therein. Having the protagonist be lodged somewhere questionably pleasant without his host even noticing is my thing.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and liking the story so far! As of right now, chapter seven is the only chapter to have the entrapment where John is stuck somewhere that isn't a shoe or under someones feet. For now. I still have a bit more planned for this story and some surprises added in that will come about later on.
[Report This]Date: July 03 2017 7:51 PM Title: The Friend
Not bad! I tore through all five chapters in one sitting. I have to wonder, though, if Sydney will stay unaware of John when he (inevitably) gets in her clutches.
Also, shouldn't Gaby's reply have read "I know I did..."
Author's Response: Thanks for your 'binge' viewing of the story, I greatly appreciate it.
As for Sydney and her unnamed friends, I hadn't planned on having them come back or even interact with John but they might make a return in a later chapter, filling the 'evil' goddesses in the story. It's a maybe however, I do have plans for this story that don't have Sydney included so far.
And for the misspelling or misinterpreting phrase, that's my bad. I'll find it and fix it, ASAP.
Date: June 29 2017 7:24 AM Title: The dream continues
Gaby really does seem like a dream girl. I wish I had someone as lovely and compassionate as her in my life, and I'm 24. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: June 28 2017 4:16 PM Title: Prologue
Chapter 3 not bad. It isn't my favorite type of story, but I think most people would enjoy this. I personally like a bit more action but I think what you are doing is fine.
[Report This]Date: June 25 2017 9:28 PM Title: Prologue
Really great start. Hoping you continue. It's nice that the descriptions don't get too repetitive.
Date: June 25 2017 6:16 AM Title: His Obsession
Great read so far. I don't know if you'll continue this story, but if you do, I for one would be happy.
[Report This]Date: June 24 2017 4:29 PM Title: Prologue
I agree one of the better written stories so far this year. I like the pacing and the premise. Also as much as I like sadistic giantesses, I do love Gentle stories too. Hope to keep reading more soon!
[Report This]Date: June 20 2017 8:54 PM Title: Prologue
One of the best stories I've read this year. I agree with the good pacing and details. Definitely hope to have plenty of unaware, feet and (shoe?) interaction. Definitely like the characters John and Gaby.
Author's Response: Thank you for you kind words, I hope to not disappoint as I add more chapters. And as of right now I have a few chapter written but there isn't that much unaware but I certainly plan on adding some later on.
Date: June 20 2017 8:10 PM Title: Prologue
Nice start to your story, good pacing and action. I look forward to seeing where it go's and how you handle the feet interaction.