Date: July 17 2017 12:32 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four (Epilogue): Stories Never End...They're Just Not Continued To Be Told!
Bring back Mrs. Van Mallory. She must rule.
Author's Response:
She will come back....
[Report This]Date: July 17 2017 5:37 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four (Epilogue): Stories Never End...They're Just Not Continued To Be Told!
Ah, yes! The opportunistic MIB's who always think they can weaponize something--or someone--without it going Frankenstein on them.
Great epilogue! Iespecially loved the budding romance between Josh and Aileen. :-)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it :) when it came to Josh and Aileen I kept my promise to keep your wishes in mind!
[Report This]Date: July 15 2017 7:25 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: "I won't tolerate mutiny!"
There's nothing wrong with epilogues. I use them a lot, myself! Because, personally, I'd rather have a good story with even a mediocre ending than a great story with no ending, at all.
Rest assured, though, there has been _nothing_ mediocre about this story of yours!
Author's Response:
Yeah I'd agree there. Although I personally always have problems to find a proper ending, especially if I can't decide whether I want to write a sequel or not :D I hope the Epilogue will serve as a tightrope walk.
Thanks :)
[Report This]Date: July 14 2017 7:13 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two: Goddess Loraine
Man! This beeyotch is really in need of comeuppance. Or should I say...bring-down-ness?
[Report This]Date: July 13 2017 11:27 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One: There Is No Easy Way Out!
Heh! Interesting plot twist.
[Report This]Date: July 12 2017 8:06 AM Title: Chapter One: Getting to know the crew (Prologue)
Loving the story so far, digging the diversity in the more 'intimate' parts, gives it flavour.
Also, really appreciate the daily updates and short waiting times :)
Keep on writing!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoy the story :)
Yeah I like to update it on a daily basis although it establishes the need of longer breaks in between new stories, as I have to write a good deal before starting to publish the chapters^^
I will :)
[Report This]Date: July 12 2017 7:20 AM Title: Chapter Twenty: Choices
Loraine is obviously the type of control freak who regards "neutral" as a four-letter word.
Author's Response:
Only a sith deals in absolutes...
[Report This]Date: July 11 2017 7:02 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen: May The Games Begin!
They looked into Corinne's a*****e and saw that--contrary to popular belief--it was devoid of brains.
Author's Response:
:D
Thanks for keeping the reviews alive mate :)
[Report This]Date: July 10 2017 5:32 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen: A War Within
To paraphrase a classic song from THE MUSIC MAN:
"She's in trouble right here in Stocking City."
"With a capital 't' which rhymes with 'v' which stands for 'Val!' "
Author's Response:
:D
[Report This]Date: July 10 2017 5:27 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen: Marriage Is?
Loraine is a narcissistic sociopath, alright. Narcissistic sociopaths always get the definition of martyrdom wrong. True martyrdom is _always_ (repeat: ALWAYS) voluntary. Never forcibly imposed!
Author's Response:
Well Narcissistic sociopaths can't relate to other people's situations and tend to just project their own distorted views into them.
[Report This]Date: July 08 2017 7:31 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen: Van Mallory
It now looks like Val is the one deserving a slap in the face for being stupid.
I love it!!! :-D
Author's Response:
:D give her a penny for everyone in her life who was thinking the same and she can financiate her spoiled plans herself.
[Report This]Date: July 07 2017 6:57 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen: A New Day, A New Dawn
Hmmmm! Maybe Val isn't as self-centered as I first thought. As for Josh's fate? Wel, it's your story, of course. Yet, even so, part of me he winds up with Aileen!
Author's Response:
In don't want to spoil things already but for the latter you'll have to be patient and it might not resolve around the circumstances you were thinking of. But I can assure you, I thought of your wishes while writing the, for the time being, last part of this story. No guarantees!
[Report This]Date: July 06 2017 9:36 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen: Soothing A Drama Queen
I'll admit that Josh is half to blame for his current situation. Agreeing to the pot-fueled suggestions of his so-called "friends" like he did. But, the other half clearly lies with his spoiled older sister, Val. Treating him like a slave with her demands that _he_ make dinner two nights in a row?
Of course, I'm sure she has some kind of rationalization that will allow her to deny those charges.
Author's Response:
Two sides of the same medal hm?
[Report This]Date: July 05 2017 9:07 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen: Love And Hate
Oh Mary is still awesome and Corrine is showing her true colors (also awesome). Can't wait to see what happens with everyone!
Author's Response:
Story will take up pace in the upcoming chapters and Corrine surely will play one of the key roles!
[Report This]Date: July 04 2017 12:00 PM Title: Chapter Twelve: May I Introcuce, My Sister Mary
Ohh I like Mary's character. She's excited by the little guy lol. What part will she play in getting the guys back to normal.
Author's Response:
Maybe you changed your opinion about her after today's chapter but I would agree, she's a cute little princess. Regarding her part in growing the guys back to normal... We'll see but I think Valery will try her best to keep her little sister out of it.
[Report This]Date: July 04 2017 6:58 AM Title: Chapter Twelve: May I Introcuce, My Sister Mary
The Cote D'Azur?! Sheesh! Just how financially spoiled is this preppie princess?
Author's Response:
Well the Middletons are a classic upper-middleclass family. Of course Valery also has some own financial potential as she's working while not paying rent as long as she lives at her parents house :) But still, quite a spoiled first born child.
[Report This]Date: July 03 2017 9:32 PM Title: Chapter One: Getting to know the crew (Prologue)
Corrine 😍🍑🍑🙏🏻🙏🏻🔥🔥🔥 YESSS! Giantess Booty time!! I hope he stays there! I can't wait for more!! THANK YOU!!!! Long chapters and lots of booty detail lol. And the rest of the story is amazing as well
Author's Response:
I try to keep the chapters at a decent length so there's something to look forward to :) I am glad you enjoy it that much!
[Report This]Date: July 03 2017 7:37 AM Title: Chapter Eleven: Search And Rescue
Damn Corrine sounds like she's gonna be the wild card. I'm very interested to see what she will do. What will Mary be like? Another great chapter!
Author's Response:
Yeah Corinne will be the key to further story development in the second half of this adventure :)
[Report This]Date: July 03 2017 4:24 AM Title: Chapter Eleven: Search And Rescue
Speaking purely for myself, I'm hoping Josh goes home with Aileen. I'd like to see her make him dance on her belly.
;-)
Author's Response:
Dance Josh Dance!
[Report This]Date: July 03 2017 4:16 AM Title: Chapter Ten: Exposed
Ah, yes! The typical post-facto rationalization that turns involuntary manslaughter into second-degree murder.
Author's Response:
Ethically and morally highly questionable :D