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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2017 12:39 PM Title: The Neighbor from Hell

Well, I think Lily is cunning enough to outsmart Albert. Might even seduce him too. I bet Lily captures Albert and uses him against Abel. Lily then takes the phone and texts Abel, "You LITTLE friend is getting cozy. Copy." Or something like that.

Ok, this Abel/Albert tango confused the heck out of me. I had to go back to check who was the main character. I mean, why do their names have to be so similar, haha!

Cain and Abel. = main character.
Albert = Al bert = I will bert = I will be tracking you.

Just like how DW said, I love the parts where Lily is teasing Abel, especially with her texts.

Ooh, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2017 11:57 PM Title: The Neighbor from Hell

How many more times will his phone go off before it's Lily on the other end or a picture of Albert tied up just like Gil was? 

I only wish you could post more often.  The suspence is driving me nuts.   

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