[Report This]Date: August 11 2017 6:02 AM Title: Without a Trace
The question I have is: what about Amy? Is that her? What if Lilly is a shapeshifter? She could be anyone. And how likely is it for Abel to go "you said hi to me in the hall last night, right?"
Magic psychos suck.
And I'm gonna miss Albert.
Cool chapter Duggernaut. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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[Report This]Date: August 10 2017 3:56 PM Title: Without a Trace
Well, there was one trace. Her perfume.
The conversations between Lily and Abel are what make this story beyond a 10 rating. I love how calmly she said that she was in Abel's room and playing with herself on his bed!
Later, we connect the dots and find out that Albert is the one struggling inside her. Duggernaut, I'm not sure if you were planning this, but it would be cool to have a side chapter about Albert being captured by Lily. I could see Albert spying on Lily, and soon enough she seduced him and shrinks him.
You know what would be funny? If Abel had a giantess fetish and was searching for new videos and found a new one with insertion. It featured a guy that looks just like Albert and Abel starts thinking it's real.
Anyone notice that the last message was "pussy", which is funny becuase Lily asked Abel where her other hand is. Abel basically answered it, and maybe Lily might respond with another picture.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: August 09 2017 9:26 PM Title: Without a Trace
My only complaint is that I have to wait for the next chapter {Boo Hiss} Another good one, and possibly an Amy snack in the near future. Wonder if she'll ever return from her night out???
It would be funny if Lily told Abel as she is releasing Albert where she is, perhaps Albert's own apartment bathroom which confuses Abel; or a secluded place and when he gets there, there is only a pile of poop with a toothpick stuck in it with a card, like a mini protest poster, with the name "Albert" writen on it. He He He