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Reviewer: Sir Purple Wolf Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2017 3:45 PM Title: A Penny for your Thoughts

I think we know that Panny is not Lilly (though everything is possible), it's more to show us that Lily wants to mess with Abel which lead me to the question of why all of this taunting. The real question is what so special about Abel? Why she like to do thid cat and mouse game specifically to him. Do they know each over? Did he heart her in the past (perhps unknowingly)?

 

Can't wait for more 😀



Author's Response:

Thanks Sir Purple Wolf - anything is possible but while this seems obvious to us, Abel is starting to be affected by Lily's taunting. why him? why not? Perhaps it simply amuses her.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2017 1:29 AM Title: A Penny for your Thoughts

Well, this answers my question. Penny is NOT Lily. If there are only a few clues that Penny is Lily, then there is a good chance, but if there are a sequence of dead giveaways like that, it seems a bit too forced that it seems too obvious. Penny is not Lily.

Pretty sure Lily is smart enough to not say "hey, I'm acting just like Penny." This is obviously a clear diversion. Lily saw Penny one day, and thought, "hey, I will get the same manicure as Penny, send Abel a pic, then describe the looks of Penny so Abel gets suspicious". Lily is just mindfucking Abel and I'm not sure how to describe it other than brilliantly stupid.

Abel seems so gullible recently and takes a thin lead and follows it to the end. He needs to stop falling for everything and ignore the pics that Lily sends him. He gets so worked up by her pussy pics. Lol.

Seriously, how do I become Lily's sex toy? Abel, Can you hire me to find Lily? That way, she can come to me and I can stay in her pussy forever. If she sends a pic of me stuck in there, forward it to me, so if I become free of her vagina, I can think of it for the rest of my life.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I does seem like a rarher heavy investiture for the sake of taking one guy but more than likely it shows Abel is becoming more and more suspicious and that logic isn't  necessarily his first point of reference.

 

Trust me if I had her number I would get it to you 😉

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2017 11:12 PM Title: A Penny for your Thoughts

Hmmm, why would Lily take all that time and effort to join the FBI?  If anyone, the female professor that he is about to meet could be Lily.

It would be nice if for once Lily showed a picture of her pussy with a tiny hand or feet sticking out, perhaps even someone's head.  Seems too late for Albert though, sounds like he died in Lily's pussy; didn't Gil survive her pussy and live until she finished digesting him?  Of course you never actually said so; one can assume quite a bit until proven wrong. he he he



Author's Response:

Logically it doesn't make sense for her to have gone through training just for the sake of the hunt.

 

Right now Abel is just starting explore other possibilities so sending a picture as you suggest would validate the game sooner than she wants. There will be a scene coming soon enough where she let's him in on the secret and him alone...

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2017 6:44 PM Title: A Penny for your Thoughts

And the term "aw heck" pops into my head. 

I like Penny.  But then I liked Karli, the gal who managed Injustice in Fan Girls. too.  But I gotta say...not Penny.

The leads are interesting.  Abel is trying to get where Gil was coming from.  Penny's angle seems solid.  This suspicion could come at a really bad time.  Bad news for the good guys....or it could lead to discovering that Penny really is Lilith.  But how would Abel prove it? Wouldn't that be a game of cat and mouse?

Loving the danger Duggernaut.  Gotta read more. 

pix



Author's Response:

It's the you never know kind of thing. Or is Abel starting to jump at shadows as a result of Lily's efforts? We saw Gil unraveling before she took him...



Author's Response:

It's the you never know kind of thing. Or is Abel starting to jump at shadows as a result of Lily's efforts? We saw Gil unraveling before she took him...

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