Date: July 15 2017 5:35 AM Title: Thursday, March 26
What a teaser, ...far too short! One sentence. Was that it? ...his life, so meaningless that he didn't even get to feel anything... Lol - that's cool though, whatever...
I thought that you could have at least drawn it out just a tad longer though, in my opinion - you could have written two or three chapters for each one. Creating more of a personal/emotional development- with Rebecca - being so careless and self-centered, it would make sense that she would actually destroy her victims without any thought, but that was simply so short. ...it didn't last long enough to actually leave an impression.
Author's Response:
I tried here, but . . . all I got was "pervy" and "likes unaware giantess". I just didn't have anything fun to work with like I did for the other three. Luckily, the remainder of Rebecca's week is filled with far more interesting people, which means longer chapters.