Date: August 08 2017 10:33 AM Title: Waking Up
Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the great work!
[Report This]Date: July 10 2017 7:08 AM Title: Welcome Home
Great story so far. I'm enjoying Leslie's maternal dominance she's the perfect mix of playful and possesive. She interacts wonderufully with her shrunken step son. I'm loving every chapter!
Date: July 09 2017 10:05 AM Title: Waking Up
You have a really great story going on here.
I like how you seem to be making Leslie a passive dominant; she talks softly but her every word is a command. It would be nice if she were more conniving and manipulative; perhaps a bit more physically abusive in a playful way like when you had her tapping him on the head.
I hope you continue this story. My one complaint, as I mentioned before, just do a quick spell-check and proof read. Other than that, pure joy to read.
Date: July 09 2017 6:45 AM Title: The change
I really like the setup so far, although you jumped through the premises quite fast at the beginning. Keep it up ;)
Date: July 08 2017 10:08 AM Title: The change
Excellent start. Make her really dominant.
Date: July 07 2017 10:43 PM Title: The change
Good start even if a bit on the short side {ha haaa}. Just do a spell-check before you post and please continue this story.