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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2017 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 11: Therapy

It is hard to get a good reading on Sab but she is an amazing tyrant.



Author's Response:

My apologies. I'm trying to show the dual nature of her character but it could just come off as a little weak. Still learning this stuff. She definitely has a real tyrant in there if she's pushed far enough. If Braxton were shrunk? Oh man! Look out! Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: nessi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2017 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: Izzellah

I'm enjoying this story so much, I don't want it to end so soon!



Author's Response:

It won't be that soon. I do have a bit of a buffer over you readers. Two chapters for me to finish but a bit more for you to read friend. Thanks!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2017 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 10: Back to School (In a sock)

Best sisters ever.



Author's Response:

Best?! Nah. They don't even have their own animated series yet.

Reviewer: MadHatter Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2017 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: Izzellah

I dunno.. I want to like this story and I DO like it. The narrative and pace is good, and the character development is there... But something about the way you portray her little sister and mom being so... uncaring kinda? about the whole situation? It just... bugs me.

 

What I mean is the way she is treated by her sister is just basic slavery overall... "DO AS I SAY CAUSE YOU HAVE TO" just bothers me for some reason. Izzy may not have been a perfect or great role model or even an amazing oldest daughter to her mother, but it just really bothers me that they both turn to treating her like crap for the most part on any decision making at all and just generally view her opinion and thoughts as absolute shit now. That to me is just not how any family would react to a situation like this...

 

The first thing her mom says to her is "Suck it up buttercup, it can always be worse" like it's no big deal that her oldest childs life is effectively over in terms of independance and any goald or dreams she may have had in it. Mother of the year award...

And Sabrina.... I just don't get her at all the way she treats her. Like I said, she might not have been that social with her younger sister or really done much with her, but I can't help but think had this situation been reversed, that Izzy wouldn't do this kind of stuff to her if it had happened. 

Maybe i'm taking these stories too seriously or reading into them too much.. I dunno. Sorry for the rant. Honestly I really love this universe overall since I read Erica's house, so any more content into it was intriguing to me. I will finish this story, but I really hope to see something... Happier? Some resolution of the family? I just feel like Izzy's whole situation is infinitely worse with the way she is treated for the most part, and that's sort of one of the points of this website I suppose... but I dunno. It just makes me kinda mad the way her family is acting... 

Am I weird for this?



Author's Response:

Hrrmmmm......This comment made me think a bit....How can I explain this. 

I"m right there with you MadHatter. If I can use as an example the new sensational story by Asukafan2001 Step Monster. As I read that story I'm like. Is this girl really torturing her step mom just for being what seems like a somewhat strict but ultimately okay stepmom. Really? Making her sacrifice her identity for what? Just because she's small and you don't like her?! Pretty harsh considering your real mom's the one that's not around. Someone may have some misplaced feelings. And her friends are little bitches too! If Nancy ever gets big again. (which is an extreme rarity in these stories so I doubt it) It's within her right to deck each one of them in the face and worse. But maybe that's the point. Okay rant about Step Monster over. 

My point is for one is I've been lurking on this sight for awhile and read countless stories like this. Basically anything by Jacksmith for one. That's kind of the nature of the genre. To me it just seems to make the most logical sense. They're small of course people won't care about them. People mistreat pets all the time. And the smaller they get the harder it is. Do you consider a snail you accidentally crushed on a rainy day? That's my thinking. Tinies don't really get justice or consideration. That being said my take on this genre isn't going to end with SPOILER WARNING!!!!!! Izzellah being some kind of permanent slave to her sister or dead or whatever. I can't guarentee you a happy ending but I can say the main characters will be in different positions from where they started. I just ask you give me a chance if you like the story. Of course you can't please everyone so if it isn't your cup of tea move on. My feelings won't be hurt. *sniffle* Also I can say as a writer you can really pile on a character because you know how it will end for better or worse. "It doesn't matter cause she's gonna die at the end in some wierd engagement ceremony." or. "She'll end up in some lab accident that grows her over one hundred feet tall and she terrorizes everyone who wronged her. I actually worry that my scenerios don't resonate with readers. That it's too tame or unbelievable or just a repeat of someone elses writing. I'm actually a little happy that you feel this way. Sorry.

Soas for the family? I really hope I'm making this seem believable and not just cruelty for the sake of it. It's really important for me each character has proper motivation for there actions and I worry about any missteps. I just chalk it up to my failing as an amateur writer and say I'll improve as I continue. 

For 1: Sabrina is definitely taking advantage of the situation. Yes. That is what's happening. Rest assured she wouldn't have the courage to do this shit to Izzellah if her older sister were normal sized. She was almost afraid of her. So now she's jumping on the opportunity now that the roles are reversed and part of her enjoys getting back at her sister for what she percieves as years of less than stellar treatment. But she also loves her sister. Maybe a little too much. She's discovering things about herself and using her new power over her Little Izzy to try and grab something she never thought possible. Who wouldn't want a little pet sister right? I'm trying to make sure anything cruel she does has a reason though. Primarily that she doesn't want her little sis dead and anyway to prevent that even some harsh treatment now will pay off in the long run. That's her thought process at least. What she really want is for them to  I don't know? Travel the world singing and dancing. Doing magazine interviews and having sexy fun times with each other on their magical airship! Or something like that. Sabrina's weird. But that's not going to happen if Izzy's default setting is bitch. 

For 2: Gloria kind of knows both her daughters and their motivations. Maybe even better than they do. She's a smart and confused woman. Who is also really sexually frustrated since the handsome, smart, and incredibly attractive love of her life uhhh....went away. You should have seen his abs. But that's beside the point. That warning she gave Izzellah has a bit of meaning to it. That's all I dare reveal on that subject. Part of her just doesn't even want to deal with all this. She wasn't supposed to be the responsible one..........Ignacio's never coming back!

For 3: Izzellah's just unlucky I guess. That's kind of the nature of almost every tiny right. Feel bad for her! Or don't? I mean she kind of deserves a little bit of it. She's not the greatest person to live with. Very cold, very rebellious. She resents her mom for more few things and Sabrina's annoying. Right? Whatever her fate ultimately is actually depends on her more than the actions of the giants who control her. What will you do girl. She should probably just give up and listen to her sister though. Really dive head first into the pet/sex toy/loving sister/partner/accessory thing that's kind of happening. It would be the best thing for her....probably? What's really the best thing for any of us?

Sooooooo this was a long one. A realllllly long one. But you asked a thought provoking questiona and got well....my thoughts. TL:DR is You're not weird for this. I hope you enjoy the story however it ends and feel free to a call me out if things don't seem right. The endings almost here friend! Thanks for the comment. I don't blame you if you didn't read this. And I don't blame the rest of you comment vultures if you did. I see you there! Skulking in the darkness!...It's cool. Bye!

 

Reviewer: Nodqfan Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2017 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 10: Back to School (In a sock)

Well, that was another fantastic chapter Sabrina is embracing her newfound role as Izzy's protector. I found Izzy's delusions hilarious with each of Sabrina's toes.

I'm also glad that Peter's not a bad kid, he was just rolling with the wrong crowd. I do admit though I found the chase scene both funny and heartwarming with the reconciliation with Peter and the description of Peter as a gazelle, and  Sabrina as a lion.

I really hope Braxton catches the Shrink Effect so he can get comeuppance like he deserves.



Author's Response:

Let's hope right? But let's be honest, he has too much charisma and charming good looks to catch it. 

Reviewer: Nodqfan Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2017 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 9: One Week's Worth

This was an interesting look into a week into the lives of the Ivory family,

I really liked the Tuesday's through Friday sections of the chapter as it showed the emotional ups and downs that the Shrink Effect can have on a family. I also liked Izzy's reactions to being chipped and being legally owned by Sabrina.

I do have two questions though is Sabrina off suspension from school, and will it be brought back as a setting into the story?



Author's Response:

Well the next chapter is titled "Back to School". You can decide what that means. Probably that the Ivory's are going to Mars to fight the space mafia! Thanks for dat comment!

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2017 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 8: Gloria

Loved this chapter. We learned a lot about Gloria. It must be amazing when she gets tinies at work. She deserves one. I am glad that she's taking over at home. At least somewhat.
Great enjoyable chapter,
Diesel
Please don't stop.

Author's Response:

Well I'll have to stop eventually when the story's over. I don't want to just drag it out for the lol's until I run out of ideas. I will say I won't stop until it's done. That's one hollow promise that no one can hold me to I plan on keeping! Thanks for the support. Big changes are about to happen for Izzellah.

Reviewer: Nodqfan Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2017 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 8: Gloria

A wrestling reference in this chapter? Best chapter ever. 



Author's Response:

Honestly I needed to think of a coll one off name and I figured he'd be obscure enough no one would point it out. Good to see some wrestling fans.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2017 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 8: Gloria

Poor Sandow, first Cena and now this.



Author's Response:

Wow someone understood that reference!!! Five points to whatever ridiculously named magic boarding school house you reside in!

Reviewer: nessi Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2017 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Izzellah

Uh oh, I hope this doesn't mean no more sexy times between Izzy and Sabrina!



Author's Response:

Maybe? I don't know. It's no like I write this story or anything. Thanks for taking the time out your day to write down some words. 

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2017 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 8: Gloria

Neat change of pace.  I must admit I'm feeling pretty bad for Izzy, I hope she catches a break somewhere down the line.



Author's Response:

I can neither confirm nor deny any "breaks" that might be happening for Izzellah in the future. That is all. Thanks again. 

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2017 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 7: Loving Relationship

Getting to some real interesting places with Izzy, as she figures out how to negotiate her dynamics rather than just futilely fighting.



Author's Response:

Yes. Izzellah is learning. Maybe she can make it afterall. Thank you for the c to the o to the m to the ment! 

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2017 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 7: Loving Relationship

Will Ms. Applegate get a hold of izzy again? I hope so.

Author's Response:

I will just respond to all your questions here friend diesel@?

1. I kinda wish I thought of that. It's a fun little giantess to tiny interaction. Izzy probably won't get to the point where she'll paint her mom's toenails. That relationships fundamentally diffrent from the one the sisters share. Despite some revelations in this chapter and the next there are lines Gloria won't cross with Izzy. Painting toenails gets close to that line.

2. If i fall in love with the concept I might do that as a funny side story but Dr. Terrence Smith is just meant to be a cheeky reference to Erica's House.

3. Neither Izzy or Sabrina paticularly care for Ms. Applegate after she advocated leaving her in a hamster cage so she could go eat lunch. Plus Sabrina has her heart set on this whole sock plan. We'll see if that works out for her. So it's not looking very likely. Just hold on good diesel. We'll get "back to school" soon!

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2017 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 7: Loving Relationship

I think you should rethink doing a chapter on dr. smith shrinking down to 2 inches and his now Gigantic lab assistant taking over. It would be fun to see him in her hands and exspiercing the tiny life.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2017 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 7: Loving Relationship

The jumping and the breakfast were great. I would have liked to have seen Sabrina crush the recese between her thumb and forefinger over the bowl. Gloria and her breasts are impressive. Maybe izzy could show off her talent and do Gloria's toenails. Izzy is falling in line.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2017 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 7: Loving Relationship

Sab and her Izzy, a lovely pair.



Author's Response:

And nothing will ever tear them apart.....except rhinos. Those bastards ruin families. Thanky-you-ie.

Reviewer: sok06 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2017 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 7: Loving Relationship

man, i love the story so far. great foot interaction, too.



Author's Response:

Great comment interaction!

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2017 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 1: Izzellah

Small comforts gave the Giantess things she could use to keep her little one in line.

Author's Response:

Small Comforts is trash. I will die alone on this hill if I have to!

Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 12 2017 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 5: Sabrina

This is a great story. I've always loved the idea of an older sister becoming the play thing of her younger sister. The role reversal is great. 

The ice cream scene was fantastic. Especially when Sabrina started to lick Izzy's butt crack! I wish it had continued to conclusion! I really hope there is more like that to come! Please!



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for commenting. They're might be a few more fun scenes.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2017 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 6: Training Day

A beautiful story.



Author's Response:

A B. E. A.uitiful comment.

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