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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2019 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 28. Katie Garcia

FUCK! This is getting so fucking hot!! O_O



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I am glad you are enjoying the story! :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2019 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 28. Katie Garcia

I know I said this before, but Dianne flirting with Max with her seductive words is a thing of beauty. I loved how Dianne teased Max while Katie was in her panties.

I think more dialogue is a great bonus to these recent chapters. I love the promises that she makes. If one tiny escapes, then the other gets punished worse. Please tell me that Max gets punished. While Katie does seem like a girl that needs to learn her place, the chemistry between Dianne and Max is super sexy and amazing.

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

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Thank you for the comment and I appreciate the good feedback :)

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